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The Conclusion Activity 1. After reading the conclusion samples, reflect on them a bit. a. Which conclusion is the best? Why? The first conclusion is the best. It stays true to the thesis and restates it consistently, also the main points are clear and well stated. b. Which conclusion needs some work? Why? The second paragraph needs some work. New ideas were introduced. The structure of the paragraph was scattered and needs work. The author needs to synthesize the main points. c. What changes would you make to the conclusion that needs the most work? I would Rephrase the thesis statement. The thesis statement is what the paper is centralized around. I would also synthesize the main points. Making the paper clear and well structured. 2. Review the conclusion you wrote for either paper 1 or paper 2. 3. Copy and paste the conclusion here: Michael Jordan's claim as the G.O.A.T over LeBron James is strongly supported by his exceptional points per game average and championship success. Jordan's scoring ability was unmatched. He consistently dominated the game with his powerful offense, averaging an astonishing 30.1 points per game throughout his career. His scoring efficiency and ability to deliver in clutch moments set him apart. Jordan's six NBA championships, coupled with his perfect record in the Finals, solidify his status as the ultimate winner. Everything from his unmatched competitiveness and clutch performances to his unparalleled cultural impact and championship success distinguish Jordan as the supreme basketball icon. LeBron James has had an outstanding career and is undoubtedly one of the greatest players of all time, Jordan's combination of scoring ability, championship success, and ability to rise to the occasion cements his legacy as the G.O.A.T. 4. Reverse outline the rhetorical moves you made in the conclusion (ex: restate thesis & summarized main points). Michael Jordan's claim as the G.O.A.T over LeBron James is strongly supported by his exceptional points per game average and
championship success. Jordan's scoring ability was unmatched. He consistently dominated the game with his powerful offense, averaging an astonishing 30.1 points per game throughout his career. Jordan's six NBA championships, coupled with his perfect record in the Finals, solidify his status as the ultimate winner. 5. Identify what you would like to improve on I would like to improve on applying MEAL technique into my paragraph. Using MEAL will help the paper feel better well rounded. 6. Revise the conclusion here: Michael Jordan's claim as the G.O.A.T over LeBron James is strongly supported by his exceptional points per game average and championship success. Jordan's scoring ability was unmatched. He consistently dominated the game with his powerful offense, averaging an astonishing 30.1 points per game throughout his career. Jordan's six NBA championships, coupled with his perfect record in the Finals, solidify his status as the ultimate winner. The G.O.A.T means greatest of all time and with all of these statistics to back him he has solidified the number one spot.
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