BC 2813 Class Sentence Activity

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Sentence Activity BC 2813 Strategic Communication for Business Professionals Name: Section: Assignment Goal: Rewrite wordy sentences to be more succinct and effective, using subject- verb-object structure. Instructions  Add your name and section to the top of the document.  Rewrite each sentence below the original sentence. o Before rewriting , review the sentence to identify problems (e.g. run-on sentences, prepositional phrases, incorrect structure or grammar, etc.). Look for the subject, verb and object in the sentence and rewrite more effectively. o Think outside the box. Consider starting with a different subject. Consider creating two effective sentences out of one long sentence. Consider what the sentence is trying to accomplish and write the overall goal more effectively. Does the sentence make sense?  Feel free to write and rewrite on the activity. Revising is part of the process. Write your first sentence. Then, write a revised sentence until you get it right.  Submit the completed activity to Canvas on the due date. 1. At this current time, the company’s user review rating is currently averaged at 3.2 stars out of 5, but with this training, I believe that customer will rise, and the company will have more repeat customers. 2. We should decide to provide a communication skills training to the staff, because learning how to build collaborative relationships can improve customer service, fostering cross-cultural understanding in the workplace could increase productivity with teams and managers, and eliminating communication roadblocks can improve trust with customers and lead to increased total revenue. 1

Sentence Activity BC 2813 Strategic Communication for Business Professionals 3. Additionally, implementing communications skill training could produce an increase in customer satisfaction, ultimately bringing in more revenue for the company, all while increasing productivity by creating better communication habits within Progressive Solutions as a whole. 4. By teaching employees effective ways to communicate with customers successfully, we could potentially improve our customer ratings, which have been on the decline recently, and increase our customer’s loyalty to us. 5. While the course is a considerable investment, it is a necessary one; as nurturing our employees’ communication skills will not only see an eventual return in the 27% of total revenue lost as a result of the lack of such skills, but it will also boost future profits as our customer relations grow stronger. 6. With the amount of knowledge our technical support has, it would be very beneficial for them to communicate to clients in the most simple way possible. 2

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