Advantages And Disadvantages Of Cola

Peer editing is also a powerful learning tool to promote syntax awareness while incorporating an inductive style. It moves the emphasis away from teacher correction to a more student friendly idea of peer collaboration that puts the students into a more central role actively involving them in the error analysis process and moving them away from the passive learning that is associated with teacher feedback. Moreover, it changes the student’s role from writer to reader giving them greater insight into the writing process and “activating their linguistic competence” (Junyi 2005, p. 50). Later work by Lundstrom and Baker (2009) came to similar conclusions and their work claims that peer editing is beneficial to learners and showed that this methodology is now widely used in schools and results gathered from research show that it is greatly benefiting students (p. 38).

After this semester of English 102, at Bristol Community College I feel that I have gained the skill to articulate what I want to convey to the reader in many ways. I don’t just look at grammatical error, but instead I look for ways to make my sentences more effective and concise. Nevertheless, I hope that this strategy will continue to help me improve my writing even further on in the future.

In Sharon A. Myers, “Reassessing the “Proofreading Trap”: ESL Tutoring and Writing Instructions” critiques Cogie’s “Avoiding the Proofreading Trap.” Instead Meyers argues that “language and ... Writing are inseparable (52),” stating that writing center tutors should not be quick to dismiss grammatical errors in a non-native English speakers paper. Learning to recognize that the language used in a paper is heavily tied to the content and argument in a paper. We have to instruct vocabulary and syntax, along with lessons in rhetoric. I strongly support Meyer’s entire paper, and find that I cannot separate grammatical errors concerning syntax in any student writing, from the argument they are trying to establish. In regards, to international

Error is something that is prominent in our daily lives. It is a natural occurrence from which we as humans tend to learn from. When the question of error in writing is provoked, things are not as simple given the fact that the, “Lack of clarity about errors contradicts what is perhaps the most common belief about error in writing, namely, that errors are simply “wrong”(Lu & Horner 189). Min-Zhan Lu and Bruce Horner are English professors at the University of Louisville, who are also co-authors of Writing Conventions. In this textbook, Lu and Horner define error from many different perspectives.Throughout the chapter pertaining to error, there is supporting evidence to back up each position on what the definition of error is. In the writing,

Coca–Cola a leading manufacturer, distributor and marketer of soft drink products. Coca–Cola was not always the sugary syrup soft drink most people know today. As a matter of fact, before 1886 Coca-Cola was made with alcohol and cocaine. Concocted by Dr. John Pemberton a pharmacist in Atlanta Georgia Coca-Cola was originally named Pemberton’s French Wine Coca. Dr. Pemberton marketed the drink as a cure all for mental and physical disorders and was sold from a soda fountain at his local drug store. A step ahead of prohibition, Dr. Pemberton replace the wine in his formula with a sugary syrup. The cocaine portion of Coca-Cola was removed before 1914 when cocaine was deemed illegal in the United States of America. Coca-Cola as we know today still contains coca but the narcotic portion of cocaine, it is removed. Today, Coca-Cola has expanded to over 200+ countries. From concerts to sport venues to local restaurants you are more than likely to come across a Coca-Cola product, Coca-Cola has had such an impact on society that it is given credit for how we portray Santa Clause today. Other credits should also be given to Coca-Cola like an increase in diabetes and other diseases.

Have you ever had a sip of soda and thought it could be dangerous? Probably not. You are probably thinking how nice and sweet it tastes. You are actually sending a whole lot of sugar to your liver. I created this scene to show that soda can be dangerous and putting labels on the drink can save hundreds of lives. If you put warning labels on soda and it says it can cause headaches, tiredness, diabetes, and even a heart attack people will consume less soda. People should have a right to know what the drink can do to your body. My three reasons are it could save lives, sugar is already a big part of our society, and warning labels decreased smoking.

I intend to prevent making this error by going to the writing center and having someone proofread my paper. I would have them teach me about my common mistakes that I do in my papers. If I would have did this, my grammar errors would not have been a problem.

The book How to Not Write Bad: The Most Common Writing Problems and the Best Ways to Avoid Them, by Ben Yagoda, focuses on teaching readers how to eliminate errors in their writing. To engage the readers, the author uses examples from his own students’ writing. By showing other students’ mistakes, Yagoda creates a mood of reassurance for the readers and tells his audience that everyone can make grammatical errors. This allows him to easily touch on a range of areas with an attentive audience. The topics are diverse with interesting topic titles, which help spark the reader’s interest. For example, Yagoda titles the section “,” rather than spelling “comma” in Punctuation (40). Using the punctuation symbol instead of the name is unusual and therefore

I do agree that Federal SS hasn't received raises to keep the with the cost of living (COLA). The COLA was created by Congregress in 1975. The price of gas effects the COLA formula so, when gas prices go down too much it can in itself trigger if SS recipients receive a raise. Whoever created the above "poster" got two important facts wrong. First, no one receives $172,00 in a year. It would take the adverage SS recipient 11 years to make $172,000. If the creator made a typo and meant $172.00 they'd still be wrong. Those 65 and older (retirement benefits) is $1,304.25 per month. Of course, things such as income from the retirement earned from the job could effect the amount of SS recieved. Since I worked for 15 years I recieve federal SS, but

Until I attend in my second class of Eng-3001, I had never stopped complaining to myself about my unacceptable WST scores and would never expected that It was a remarkable experience to attend in a writing class when I nearly finish my master program. But In the second class, the professor’s comment of my Diagnostic essay and the lecture about the structure of a competent essay clearly let me recognize that my WST scores had nothing wrong, but I had. Fortunately, the practical and plentiful classes didn’t give me any chance to start a new complaint about another unacceptable score of the Diagnostic essay. Nevertheless, it helped me to recognize and improve my weakness in building completed structure of essay, correctly using example and quoting

In 2010 alone sugary- drink consumption killed almost 200,000 people. Despite it being so detrimental to health, Soda is the most popular beverage in the US and makes up almost thirty percent of all beverages consumed annually. The average person drinks over six thousand ounces of soda each year Soda consumption has been directly linked to diseases such as cancer, diabetes, and obesity. It is time for us to take action and place a “junk food” tax on soft drinks to discourage people from purchasing them. . Some people believe that a soda ban would limit personal freedom, which they believe is essential in a democracy, and past proposals was rejected because of this. However, soda is taking many lives, and it is time for us to take action; we need to make our world a happier, healthier place.

The political situation of a country affects its economic settings and economic environment affect the business performances. Coca-Cola sales are impacted by a set of economic factors that beyond are beyond the company’s control. These factors include the level of economic growth in the country and in the industry, tax rates and currency exchange rates, interest rates, labor costs and others. The global economic and financial crisis of 2007 – 2009 is a relevant example of an economic factor that greatly impacted the majority of businesses around the globe. However, the crisis has impacted Coca-Cola to a lesser extent compared to many other businesses. Its’ operating margin remained at industry-front 22% despite the crisis, although dividend yield was reduced to 2.6 % Quarts. (Timmons, H. (2014). Economic factors relate to goods, services, and money. Despite directly affecting businesses, these variables refer to financial state of the economy on a greater level –whether it be local or global, inflation increases cost of production. Consequently, Coca-Cola had to face the uncontrollable problem of increasing their pricing. With this increase they risk losing customers who cannot afford their products because it is a desired product not a necessity. Due to inflation in 11 years the price of an identical bottle of Coca Cola has doubled in price. Alternatively, Coca Cola could be forced to lower their prices to facilitate an increase in consumption

“There are many instances, however, where reality and what we are taught do not correspond as to actual “correctness”, the actual acceptability, of what we are told to avoid”, states Hall (14). The liberal view is amoral because there is no standard for anyone using language and grammar. There is an attitude of nonchalance when analyzing what the linguist believes, therefore what is socially acceptable will work, for the linguist. Hall also states, “It is easy, on the one hand, to see that those who talk or advertise in this way and offer to cure our errors in pronunciation or grammar are simply appealing to our sense of insecurity with regard to our own speech.” The idea that linguists believe correct pronunciation and grammar usage being enforced affects one’s insecurity is amoral. The criticism of grammar and speech should encourage a person to use the correct rules and pronunciation which can lead to building confident speakers and writers. If linguist continue to find correcting affecting insecurities, individuals will never understand why preserving language is so

Rationale: this activity will help students practice spelling, vocabulary, grammar and text formation which differ quite a lot from speaking.

In the classroom relating to descriptive grammar learners can be encouraged to move away from a prescriptive approach to grammar by using a guided discovery in which they look for examples of variations in use in authentic texts. These examples can be compared to prescriptive rules in order to decide if they are useful or