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Aint No Good Girl

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The Story “So I Ain’t No Good Girl” by Sharon Flake is a portion of the book and the scene stood out the most in the story. It caught my attention on how the setting and the characters made the scene flow. The main character of the story is on her way to her bus stop and she gets into a little confrontation with girls at her bus stop. Raheem her so called “Boyfriend” shows up and they have small talk about how she will cover up for him at school, since he isn’t going. The bus arrives and she gets on the bus. When she is seated and gives Raheem one last glance, she sees him with one of the girls she had a little confrontation with and the way they were pressed against each other and she lost it. The scene of the story is realistic because of …show more content…

“Tonight when I see him I’m gonna… I’m gonna… make him something to eat and act like I ain’t seen nothing at all.” I don’t think she handled it because she started thinking about how she will ignore what happened at …show more content…

“Oh no you didn’t I say digging my elbow into some girls stomach slapping my hand up trying to get to the front of this thing but it’s too late the bus driver won’t stop.” It would have taken the story to a whole other level and maybe she would have had different thoughts about still being his girlfriend. The way I fell the conflict could have lessened is if she thought about not having a relationship with Raheem. “I’ll go to his class. I think and tell his teacher his teacher he was sick this morning that he will take his test tomorrow.” She would have had the mind set of not wanting to interact with Raheem any longer. I think the audience would have engaged into the text if we knew more about a particular scene. “When I got to tell her don’t even think about it, I trip over my own two feet.” I think the audience would have gotten a little more hype about that particular scene if we knew what would have happened if she didn’t trip over her two feet and went after the

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