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Analysis Of Children Need To Play Not Compete By Jessica Statsky

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In the essay "Children Need to Play not Compete," author, Jessica Statsky, tries to convince parents that organized sports can be dangerous by informing them of the dangers of children’s sports. Statsky warns that both noncontact and contact sports played from the ages of six to twelve years old could have long-term effects for the child as a player and a fan. Statsky lists many reasons for her opinion including the risks for physical and psychological harm. Statsky has a very convincing argument and many valid points in her essay; however, her argument is inconsistent because she does not fully support all claims and fails to take the parent’s opinions into account. Statsky's thesis statement is thoroughly supported throughout the essay using

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