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Analysis Of Dear Students: Don T Let College Unplug Your Future

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Ironically, one thing most college students tend to dislike is college. They would rather spend the day on their phones and computers, scrolling through various social media feeds or watching YouTube videos. Most parents and teachers consider this a waste of time, but one professor feels college is actually the waste of time. Gideon Burton, a professor at Brigham Young University, wrote an article for college students entitled “Dear Students: Don't Let College Unplug Your Future” on his blog in 2009. This college professor wants college students to understand that college is not the only way they can excel in life, and may, in fact, be hindering their progress. He is effective in his message by highlighting sentences in his article he feels …show more content…

Highlighting draws attention to statements like: “your college experience is likely to set back your education, your career, and your creative potential,” a statement that encompasses the main point of his article. Burton wants students to know that he is on their side so he highlights the phrases that prove it. Highlighting his key statements shows what he is arguing and proves to his audience that he, a college professor, wants them to use technology, and as this is a relatively unheard-of phenomenon, the students are more likely to read his article in depth. For students that are still skeptical of the eventual ‘but’ against social media usage, Burton highlights his call to action in his last paragraph, hoping students will “feel the energy of living knowledge sustained by the new media” and proving once again that he does stand by students and their technological …show more content…

To lighten the mood, he uses different kinds of humor to keep his audience engaged and to relate to them. He tells students to think about the next time “you pull an all-nighter for a term paper that will get thrown in the trash within the month,” relating to the dry humor most college students have regarding their school work, or to life in general when he reminds that “a diploma is deadness, a sort of gravestone marking your time. A nice memorial, hopefully, but it isn't a living thing.” He tells students to “get a Second Life!” referring to a life simulation video game joked about in popular media and gives statements such as “you need your own spherical chickens,” which out of context makes no sense. In a culture where editing is easy, Burton mimics the warnings of “old, vengeful girlfriends armed with Photoshop and your mother's maiden name!” that stuffy adults give to dissuade students from using social media unwisely. The response to those stuffy adults is “paleo-pathetic!,” which uses another form of humor students love: puns. Between old man jokes and the recommendation that “you dont evin haf to spel rite,” Gideon Burton understands how to keep his audience engaged and is successful in this

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