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Analysis Of Naomi Shihab Nye's 'Making A Fist'

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“We forget that we are all dead men conversing with dead men.” This is the opening quote that Naomi Shihab Nye samples from Jorge Luis Borges in her poem “Making a Fist.” Opening with this quote may impress upon readers that this poem is morbid. What Nye gives us instead is her youthful remembrance of the childhood reverie she maintained at the thought of dying. One may note these qualities by the euphemisms she uses for death as if it were as simple as “the life sliding out of me,” or by the smile that visits her when she remembers her mother entertaining the questions she, a seven-year old with a stomach ache, had regarding her supposed impending doom. Making these qualities apparent through performance is an act of child’s play itself. …show more content…

When she uses words like “sliding,” “swirl,” and “split,” they must emphasize the nature of the words, such as slowing down to enunciate “sliding” and “swirl” while mimicking the nature of “split” by spitting the word out quickly and resuming the normal pace and tone of the poem around it. Additionally, it does well for the performer to busy their hands and reenact the images Nye creates. With “sliding,” for instance, the performer can use one hand to mimic a sliding motion down the front of their body. For “swirl,” they can lift their hand up as if to a window, similar to its use in the poem, and twist their hand as if turning a globe. Finally, for “split,” the performer can mimic the sudden and violent nature of the word by bringing their hands to their stomach, and pulling them apart as if splitting an object in two. These actions should be committed at the same time that the words are uttered to emphasize the phrases themselves.
The performer must then make use of a momentary pause and adjust themselves to begin with the naive, inquisitive, and somewhat desperate tone of a child worried about death. This should mark the beginning of the second stanza, but should not carry on for the rest of the poem. The effect of using this specific tone is to mark the seriousness of the situation for Nye at the time—a time when she was sick and believed herself on the verge of death. However, Nye regards this scene with a lighthearted air, as is evident from when she reveals in

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