Part two begins slowly and adds more confusion. The story is overly convoluted with new characters and new events. Instead of Chris working on figuring out who’s after him and finding the chip, the story changes directions and it turns into stopping a major explosion and about a new world order.
Also, James dominates part two, not Chris. In fact, characters well established in part one, are not active in part two, such as Kurt Slowensky.
Part two spends too much time on the hypnosis scene, the political unrest, Big Mike (Mike Berg), dreams about James and Chris, and flashbacks about James’ time in Somalia, and other series of events.
The concern is that the first parts of the story (part 1) setup a strong expectation that this story would be about retrieving information from James’ memory regarding the location of the chip.
However, part two feels like an entirely different script. Thus, it would benefit the script to focus on the main storyline set up in the first script.
However, part 2 offers more action, which is absent in part one. Both part 1 and part 2 need to be combined, but it needs to focus on ONE main goal. Too many flashbacks confuse the audience. The only flashbacks should be relevant to Chris finding the chip or putting pieces together about who might be after him. Granted, he may stumble upon a bigger conspiracy, but it has to be fluidly connected to part one.
The timeline in part two remains unclear. Also, at times, it’s unclear if James is truly
My opinion about chapter two is that it worse than chapter one. I hated it when Curly died when she was just trying to be nice. I disliked it when Buck and Spitz got into a fight. I liked it when it said buck got stronger and smarter. I also liked it when Buck joined the other dogs to howl at the northern lights.
The song ‘there’s nothing I would rather be than to be an aborigine’ will be used in the sequel, to show the connection that the Aboriginal people have with their home. Another key item that will remain the same is the characters. There will be no new characters added, rather I will develop the character of Rosie. In this sequel, the location will begin in Boomed, not stay in Australia throughout the entirety of the movie because of Rosie’s music taking her on tours across the globe, the locations will be in America, France and Broome. The atmosphere of this movie will remain the same: cheesy and funny, but showing the viewers a side of the Aboriginal they may have not seen
F. Scott Fitzgerald was born on September 24, 1896. He was born in Saint Paul, Minnesota, and his parents were both born in Maryland and Irish. You could say he grew up very lower middle class. Fitzgerald’s views of relationships began at an early age. It was interesting because many of his best books came from the idea that women & men relationships is just a game with one person ending up being a winner. He claimed to forever have a jazz-age attitude that would stick with him for life, and it worked. F. Scott Fitzgerald died December 21, 1940 at the young age of 44.
Unlike the first chapter, chapter 2 is written in third person limited. Lou Ann Ruiz is the new main character along with her husband Angel. Only a year into their
There are lots of small differences that you may or may not of noticed. One of those small details is that the name of Berthe Erica Crow was changed to Erica Berthe Crow. Another difference is that Angela doesn’t marry Denton, instead she marries Ed Plum. Also Crow wanted Violet to marry the senator instead of George. Whereas Crow wanted Violet to marry Chris’s great uncle. The first bomb is another small difference that doesn’t change the story. At Judge J.J. Ford’s party is where the first bomb went off instead of the coffee shop. Those are only a few of the small differences that don’t change the story that much.
The content portrayed in chapter one was not as emotional as the second one. The first had a little bit of humor to where as
One of the things I liked the most about first season is how everything was linked somehow, how the end could stand by itself and if there wasn’t a season 2, viewers would still get a cool ending. There were questions obviously, and that is the first issue of season 2:
Again it served as a break to get away from the Hildy and English storylines, and flesh out Molk's character a bit more, but that's really the only thing that's happening in The McCormack Mulligan that could be advancing the plot in this episode. I could probably have skipped this episode and tuned in next week and not missed much, because there's not a lot of forward movement happening here. Where's the Murder in the First that kept the pace fast and the action intense at the start of the season? This feels a bit more like a slow burn to me, and hopefully the action will pick up next week, because at the moment, the show seems to be falling into the same trap that it did last season by having the episodes in the middle of the season drag out a
Although there is still Mike’s constant whining over his wife, the story is getting much better, but it is also getting creepier. Dr. Bering can now see beings from another universe, and to prove that he is worthy of seeing them, he strips himself bare and lights a candle. The way he describes this other being reminds me of a character from Star Trek. Other than that, it is more of Mike’s whining and memories of his wife. At the end of the sixth chapter though, he gets hit by a car, and Mr. Bering mysteriously just shows up. This keeps me hoping for more action in the following pages. The story is still progressing, even with Mike’s
It would benefit the script to reorganize the events. The idea of the lawsuit and the investigation into the cover-up is very compelling and would definitely make for a solid film. It’s this part of the story that is the most engaging.
You only need to watch the first 25 minutes to answer the questions, however you might enjoy watching the whole episode.
The main concern is that the script tries to tell two different storylines, each of which, are different story types.
I see the second article like the continuing of the first one, only more acute and with more
Season Two: The Meander Key. The main flow of the series. After discovering that telepaths exist and in great numbers, but before battle lines can be drawn, our detectives must figure out what each side wants. Series two will go into more depth of the bone people, Leontius Decentius, Genghis Khan, Hsekiu, and Jolene memories. While at the same time, leaving New York, and exploring the rest of the world.
It could be argued that the second episode of a TV series is even harder to get right than the pilot. The work a premiere puts in to getting viewers just hooked enough to come back for a second week, could easily be undone with a lackluster follow-up. Luckily, Pitch is showing no signs of hitting any such slump. In fact, “The Interim” was a step above the already fantastic pilot – the dialogue went from a bit overdramatic to realistic, and it proved Pitch is not a show that needs to rely on the same device every episode in order to maximize emotional punch. As much as I loved the Dad Twist, seeing him week-to-week in “ghost” form, or having another twist thrown in the mix, would quickly have turned this beautiful bit of storytelling into a