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Analysis Of The Book ' The Great Gatsby ' By F. Scott Fitzgerald Essay

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Part two begins slowly and adds more confusion. The story is overly convoluted with new characters and new events. Instead of Chris working on figuring out who’s after him and finding the chip, the story changes directions and it turns into stopping a major explosion and about a new world order.
Also, James dominates part two, not Chris. In fact, characters well established in part one, are not active in part two, such as Kurt Slowensky.
Part two spends too much time on the hypnosis scene, the political unrest, Big Mike (Mike Berg), dreams about James and Chris, and flashbacks about James’ time in Somalia, and other series of events.
The concern is that the first parts of the story (part 1) setup a strong expectation that this story would be about retrieving information from James’ memory regarding the location of the chip.
However, part two feels like an entirely different script. Thus, it would benefit the script to focus on the main storyline set up in the first script.
However, part 2 offers more action, which is absent in part one. Both part 1 and part 2 need to be combined, but it needs to focus on ONE main goal. Too many flashbacks confuse the audience. The only flashbacks should be relevant to Chris finding the chip or putting pieces together about who might be after him. Granted, he may stumble upon a bigger conspiracy, but it has to be fluidly connected to part one.
The timeline in part two remains unclear. Also, at times, it’s unclear if James is truly

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