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Analysis Of The Montgomery Bus Boycotts

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Question Rating Comments/How to Improve 1. Rate this paper’s overall readability (Lowest/1=unreadable, Highest/5=very readable) 1 2 3 4 5 There are some places where the sentence doesn’t make sense that you could improve. For example, in your fourth paragraph, the following sentence is wrong “The after Rosa Parks arrest it was clear to Jo Ann Robinson now was the time to implement the city wide bus boycott.” I think you meant: Then after Rosa Park’s arrest it was clear to Jo Ann Robinson now was the time to implement the city wide bus boycott. 2. Examine the sentence at the end of the first paragraph, which should be this author's thesis. What is the author's thesis? Quote it directly, and rewrite this author's thesis in your own words. The leaders set the tone for the movement and established a discipline for all the supporters to follow. The leaders of the Montgomery Bus Boycott set the tone for the movement and established a structure for the boycotters to follow.…show more content…
Rate the strength of this paper’s thesis. (Lowest/1=very weak, Highest/5=very strong) 1 2 3 4 5 You have a good thesis; however, you could improve this by being more detailed and specific. 4. Which paragraph contains the best topic sentence? What makes it so good? The boycott was also successful because of the economic impact it had on the city. The best topic sentence is located in the seventh paragraph. This topic sentence is good because it summarizes what the paragraph will be talking
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