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Analysis Of Toni Cade's Explanations Of Scientific Concepts

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Her explanations of scientific concepts are not detailed and lack proper transition from the previous topic. “Douglas was assistant coach for the freshmen football team. His players never had to go to the bathroom after a game. He wanted to know why. This turned out to be a very important question. Cade thought he knew the answer. Florida’s extreme heat caused players to sweat. They sweat so much that their bodies had no water left to make urine.” (Mattern 8-9). Mattern states the obvious when she explains that heat causes people to sweat. Then when she goes on to explain urine. She does not include any information about the function of urine or how it is created by the body. Her word choice also creates a very shallow and simplistic tone that

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