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Analyzing Kevin Brockmeier's 'The Ceiling'

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In Kevin Brockmeier’s “The Ceiling,” a husband, the narrator, retells the day of his son's birthday because he remembers it for two particular reasons - firstly, he notices for the first time that there was something quite strange about the sky and secondly, he analyzes his wife, Melissa, realizing she is not behaving like her normal self when she suddenly utters the remark: "My life is a mess." As the story folds, the narrator’s puzzling curiosity is continuously fixated on the black object in the sky as it had started to slowly descend closer to the town without coming to terms that, at the same time, his marriage and relationship with his wife are currently in jeopardy as it all begins to disintegrate before his eyes. It was not until …show more content…

Interestingly enough, as the materials become more and more sturdy from wood to clay to stone, the darker and more hidden these intimate thoughts the narrator’s wife could be hiding from her husband. This intimate thought she is hiding is in fact a someone, and the moment she “steps inside” and shuts the “door,” it further signals to our narrator how his wife is truly attempting to cover up any possible stains or hints that will allow her husband to find out about her hidden secret. And when the time comes for our narrator to confront his wife’s shelter, he witnesses “tinkering at the window,” determining whether or his wife would open the “latches” as a reveal or seal the “cracks” to further mask the truth. As soon as our narrator begins to crack the pieces of the puzzle and grasps the knowledge that his wife is hiding something of significant importance, he is shown stuck dumbfounded in place as the movements at the window displays either the opening and reveal of her most intimate thoughts or further sealing of them away from

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