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Ap English Reflection

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“Finally!” I thought to myself as summer is slowly approaching, “I am done with this high school forever.” I honestly am so excited for summer that each day I count down the number days I have for school. Moreover, I constantly think of the activities that I will do during the summer that sound a lot better than school. Despite being overjoyed of leaving high school, I certainly would not deny that I have tremendously improved as a writer. True, as mentioned in all of my previous reflective essays, I still despise English; however, I have to grudgingly admit College Credit Plus English 1010 refined my writing skills from my junior year in AP English class. My classmates and teacher pointed out some ways that I could brush up my essays, which …show more content…

The supporting sentences appeared scattered, which basically proved that I had coherence problems in my essay. I would even have my evidence before my claim in some instances! When my classmate--Connor-- read my essay, he was puzzled with what I was doing with my sentences. For instance, in my compare/contrast paper, I tried to prove two claims at once, which was a terrible idea since the reader couldn’t identify what evidence referenced what claim. Basically, it was a disaster! There was no clear focus of what I was trying to write. In fact, it also ruined the purpose of the compare/contrast paper. To clarify, my failure to correlate the claim and evidence efficiently made the compare/contrast paper appear as content-based rather than identifying the similarities and differences between the writing styles of the authors. Despite originally messing up, I did notice an improvement when I concentrated singling out my claims and attaching evidence one by one with each respective claim. My synthesis essay; for example, effectively structured each claim with strong pieces of evidence that detailed on how mandatory volunteering is deteriorating high schooler’s admission chances to college. Afterward, I would use a transition word such as “additionally” or “furthermore” to mention my second claim and then support it with evidence. Thus, organizing my claim and evidence structure fundamentally created a smooth flow of my consciousness, which enabled my readers to understand what I was attempting to prove in my

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