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Back To You Literary Devices

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The story ‘Back to You’ is the story of a woman who has lost her childhood love to war, and is reflecting on their time shared together, and the deep loss she feels. As she struggles to come to terms with her grief, the character searches for peace, and resolves to move forward with her life by the end of the piece. After experiencing grief of my own recently, I wished to use this intense emotional experience to depict a journey of catharsis, and connect my writing to my own personal context. In this way, the audience is able to relate to the emotional weight of the story. The text consists of only one character, who remains nameless, and who tells the story of her romance through flashbacks. The character is deeply connected to her setting, and much of her emotions are reflected in her surroundings; thus, her emotions are physicalized. The story is very much an internal monologue, and the character’s emotions and thoughts drive the plot of the story. I wrote this from a place of my own sense of loss; my great grandfather recently passed …show more content…

A cyclic structure complements the use of temporal distortion, by taking the story back to the image of the ocean, representing life moving on, and the character’s acceptance of this. The character starts in a place of turmoil, and through reflection, finds peace. I was worried when writing this that there was not enough action in the plot to engage the audience, but I designed the story this way to place emphasis on the persona’s, and my own, emotional journey. An alternate ending could have included the character revealing that she is, in fact, the deceased one, or have her embracing a hallucination and becoming lost in her grief, but I felt that these took from the emotional value of the story. The final ending allows resolution, and gives the persona reason to move

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