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Brief Summary Of Rita (60's)

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In 1810, a desperate father poses as a convict on a prison ship to find his young daughter who was transported to Australia to work in a factory.

BRIEF SYNOPSIS:

Between 1787 and 1868 convicts from Britain were transported to a little known island called Australia. Many of the men and women were sent for petty crimes.

In present day Australia, RITA BELL (60’s) is eager to tell a journalist, RICHARD STANTON, the true story about a man named JAMES RAMSEY. Richard challenges Rita that there’s no written evidence of her story. Rita reassures him that the story she is about to tell is very true and has been passed down the family line. Her ancestor wrote the story in a journal in 1856, and while the journal has been lost, the story reamins the same. Richard agrees to hear her story.

It begins in 1810 London. James Ramsey (30’s), a single father, cares for his young daughter, LILY (10). They …show more content…

While it may not be believable that Delwyn would make the quip about having an itch (why would a prisoner incite the person who could kill him and one would think he would be killed because of his remarks), regardless he has a voice that reflects his personality.

Here are a few examples of areas where dialogue could be stronger: On page 28, the dialogue about slurping their feces isn’t engaging. James’ dialogue about seeing a prisoner taken is repetitive and on the nose. The soldier saying, “Where’d they go?” is also on the nose. Saying, “I just wish she knew that I was coming for her,” isn’t compelling and sounds a bit contrived. Lily twice repeats that her father doesn’t even know where she is (page 41 and 55). On page 87, James Ramsey twice says, “Where are we going?”

The characters of Rita and Richard are well liked, especially Rita. She also has a distinctive voice and one can hear and feel how much she wants the story to be told. Richard undergoes a small character arc from disbelief to believing at the

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