CARTEL JUNGLE is a proposed new dramatic TV series. The series’ main setting in Mexico involving a cartel marijuana jungle is a very unique location. It provides for an original hook for this series. The idea of the cartel, the drug trade, and the competition in the trade is a nice setup for conflict and gritty tension.
The pilot’s tone is dramatic. The pilot contains violence and some intriguing twists and turns, as well as some potentially complex characters. The pilot/series explores greed and lust, as well as revenge. There are some nice cultural features and superstitions that work nicely to help convey the tone.
In fact, the opening sets the tone and conveys to the viewing audience that this is a violent and deadly world. With that said, however, the pilot needs more development. The overall premise of the series isn’t conveyed
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It’s not understood how they find the shrine room. It feels like suddenly they are there. As mentioned, the idea of everyone running into the jungle doesn’t feel all that believable.
Overall, the premise for the series isn’t clearly conveyed to the audience. The audience (producer) really has no idea what the series is going to be about. This is critical in trying to market the pilot.
The script really needs to revisit the structure. Perhaps begin with Luke learning that he’s inheriting a “jungle” from his biological mother. Maybe he wants nothing to do with it, but someone talks him into going to Mexico to check it out.
If Isabella is part of the cartel, then show how the cartel works and how they smuggle in the drugs or how they sell it. Make her a more serious, relatable character. Eliminate the fondling, the attempted sex scenes, and so many scenes about the body parts of the attorney.
Make the idea of the doctor feel less like it’s “sci fi” and consider eliminating the idea of him being a pedophile – the industry doesn’t like to have films or series that feature
What’s more these cartels’ will also use the kidnaped women and girls for their own personal use. Nevertheless, the spread of human trafficking in Mexico has declined, yet the biggest problem has moved into the Mexican mountains, where remote areas have little or no authority at all. These areas are where the cartel usually pays off the authorities. But, in the case
The pilot opens with a teaser that takes place in a different time-period with the older protagonist. It’s not a teaser that grabs the attention of the audience. Consider opening with the explosion. Then make it clear to the audience so that they understand that the people who are killed are Osage Indians. Don’t show the perpetrators. Allow the agents to uncover their identities one-by-one to add more anticipation, suspense, and tension.
SinaloaMore…Signal drug cartel, is the biggest and most powerful drug trafficking organization in North, Central and South America. Which was established in the 80s and operates in several Mexican states and many other countries with criminal activities such as money laundering. It has grown far beyond our borders and is now believed to be very influential and a far-reaching drug organization in the United States. The cartel members rely on connections at the highest levels and are led by Mexico's mighty drug lord Joaquin GuzmanGuzman's alias “El Chapo” who recently escaped from a maximum-security prison in Mexico. SinaloaMore…Signal has long been connected with contraband drugs in Mexico, as well as the location for marijuana and poppy cultivation.
Many critics are now making comparisons between the Mexican drug cartels, like the one mentioned above, and legitimate corporations like Netflix, or Google. There are currently seven major Mexican drug cartels. Although, the cartels may all come from different backgrounds and have different approaches towards trafficking drugs, they all share a similar business style structure to
The movie rendition of the four-act play The Crucible begins with a girl lying in bed frozen. The town fears that witchcraft is to blame. The town doesn’t know but the girl is alive and awake and is only faking it all. A group of girls in Salem, Massachusetts make false accusations of witchcraft because of Abigail Williams. She convinces all the girls to lie to the court and to claim to have seen the Devil so that Abigail can have what she wants. She wants John Proctor, a married man with whom she had an affair with. Abigail’s accusations of witchcraft towards John’s wife Elizabeth are the focus of the story. When Abigail’s selfishness does too much harm she flees leaving John and Elizabeth in prison awaiting death. John Proctor must decide
The idea of the series has a strong hook regarding the Osage Indian murders known at the reign of terror. It’s based on true facts and the idea of the murders would make for a compelling and fascinating limited series or film. It’s a great setup for conflict, suspense, and tension.
The document then discusses how the administration will handle the cartels. The main policy will include strengthening federal law and “ensur(ing) that federal law informant agencies give a high priority and devote sufficient resource to efforts to identify, interdict, disrupt, and dismantle transnational criminal organizations…including through the investigation, apprehension, and prosecution of members.” Trump wants more federal agencies to share information and coordinate with other federal law enforcement in order to dismantle cartels. The people that would lead this combined effort are the Secretary of State, the Attorney General, and Secretary of Homeland Security. The federal agencies that would help combat cartels include, the Organized
While there strengths to this pilot, overall the pilot would benefit from more development. The areas to discuss include the structure, the pace, clarification, and tension, as well as further character development.
The increasing momentum of Mexican drug cartels is accompanied by a surge of violence and police corruption that is catastrophic for Southern Texas-Mexico border city protection in the United States. This escalates the necessity for firearms possessed by citizens because of their defense benefits that surpass any negative effect. Mexican drug cartels are criminal organizations that are located in Mexico and focus on profiting large amounts of money from illegal substances by creating the product and smuggling it across the U.S.-Mexico border. This billion-dollar market is brutally fought for by the Sinola Cartel and the Gulf Cartel, who establish fear and authority in Mexican cities eliminating all that oppose them including those in the United
The narrative form exhibited in the opening sequence seems simple at first glance, but actually conveys a multitude of
At the beginning of the movie we are shown an opening sequence introducing the main characters in the movie. We are briefly introduced to each character’s situation and the goals they are trying to achieve but we soon
The U.S. War of Independence ensued from the increasing conflict between the British North American colonies and England. However, this conflict cannot be traced back to a single cause, rather, to multiple issues and protests towards the tyranny of the mother country. Even though the numerous Acts enforced by the British government undoubtedly generated dissatisfaction amongst the colonists, it was the government’s rejection of cooperation or compromise that persuaded many colonists of the inevitability of war and independence.
Drug cartels have grown and expanded throughout the interior and exterior of states for many years. The way drugs started to be introduced to Mexico, Colombia, and other places around the world was believed to be a myth. It was a tale that was known by many through storytelling, which over the years turned into an actual realistic issue. One of the most known cartels that existed for a long time was The Medellin Cartel. It became a subculture of its own, creating a world full of violence, women, money, firearms, death but most importantly power and fear. Located in Colombia this brutal subculture will show how they become one of the wealthiest subculture in the world surpassing even its own country’s riches.
War can be disastrous and deadly by any terms. In the past, wars war fought with arrows and swords; then technological advances led to single-shot rifles and cannons. The further the human race got with technological advances, the deadlier war had gotten. This led to civilians and military personnel dying at any time. Buildings and homes being demolished in a single blow. Propaganda spreading hysteria and fear in a matter of weeks instead of months; the difference being the propaganda lasting months and the trust of the governments of nations being skewed from the people and an assassination was the finishing blow to spark a world war. That is exactly what happened with The great war or World War One.
A cartel is a formal organization set up by a group of firms that produce and sell homogenous products for the purpose of enacting and sharing monopolistic rents. Their organizations consist of formal agreements between competing firms to control prices or exclude entry of a new competitor in a market. The sellers or buyers of a cartel agree to fix selling prices, purchase price or reduce production using a variety of tactics so that competing on price is avoided. Because most of these firms are monopolies, they tend to have considerable amounts of market power, thus making them want to behave like monopolies. With its lack of power, a cartel acts as a counter-veil to an imperfectly competitive market where fewer sellers have the ability to base their products on decision making and supply and demand.