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Civil War Dialectical Journal Essay

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1. “The crews walked the blocks of their neighborhood, loud and rude, because it was only through their loud rudeness that they might feel any sense of security and power” (Coates 22). Coates stated that these groups of people used their loudness and rudeness as a façade in order to feel powerful, because just like Coates, they feared for their bodies. This did not surprise me because people everywhere use this tactic in order to feel confident and powerful when they are scared; similar to the phrase “fake it until you make it”. 2. “For the crime of destroying the body of Prince Jones, I did not believe in forgiveness” (Coates 79). In this quote, Coates is demonstrating his anger towards the PG County Police for killing Prince Jones. It did …show more content…

“I was obsessed with the Civil War because six hundred thousand people had died in it. And yet is had been glossed over in my education, and in pop culture” (Coates 99). It did not surprise me that the Civil War was not taught in depth to Coates, because it was not taught in depth to me. It also did not surprise me that Coates became obsessed with the Civil War due to its history and his curious personality. 4. “I am sorry that I cannot make it okay. I am sorry that I cannot save you- but not that sorry” (Coates 107). While this quote is a serious one from Coates to his son, I particularly like it because he is exclaiming his regret, but not too much. This did not surprise me because Coates wanted his son to be strong and able to deal with racism, like him. Coates was sorry that his son had to deal with racism, but because he had to, he wanted him to be strong. 5. “To yell ‘black-on-black crime’ is to shoot a man and then shame him for bleeding” (Coates 111). I was not surprised when I read this quote because it is exactly something I would expect Coates to say. Throughout Between the World and Me Coates offers powerful lines that make the audience feel as strongly as he did, such as this. This quote also did not surprise me because of its truth, to pin black people against each other and then shame them for it is

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