Co-Worker Reflection

The steps that I took to review my rough draft for logical fallacies, citation errors, and plagiarism are: Step one. I reread my research to make sure that my thesis and the topic sentence relates to each other. Provide a good thesis and introduction that states what the research is

Reflection on My Self-Performance as a Team Coordinator Reflective Essay - Belbin Team Role Theory in practice To further understand Belbin Team Role Theory, I, together with four students formed a team and simulated as being authorized by the Songjiang Government Bureau to investigate into the current situation and the prospect of the higher education industry in Songjiang District. Through unremitting team efforts, we successfully demonstrated our findings and recommended several ideas via a formal presentation. Reviewing the three-months-long process of cooperation, I really found this experience of learning meaningful and fruitful. This reflective essay is a conclusion of my sympathetic introspection of the

Part ONE: Please discuss your experiences at your site. What did you do? What were the clients like? The staff?

At this point, you should now be able to summarize your evaluations and connect it to your research report. Do not forget to emphasize its contribution to the field, as well. Again, avoid subjective assessments that you cannot justify. End your critique with an APA formatted reference list. Remember to use the heading “References,” not “Bibliography,” or “Works Cited.” Also, do not put the font in bold. Center the word at the top of the page, like what you will see on the next page. Also recheck your parenthetical and in-text citations and make sure they match with your references list to avoid unintended plagiarism. Make sure your reference list is alphabetized and properly indented. Word count of this dummy critique: 458 words excluding

After reading my paper and the reviews I recieved on it, I will definitly fix the errors that Amy pointed out. As far as going into more detail, I think that my middle paragraph has a lot of detail already, and I think I like it the way it it. However, I may decide to make some changes when the time to actually make the changes comes.

In this essay I am going to reflect on my experience working as part of a team and the preparation on an oral presentation I had to do in class with people from different courses, as part of the Foundations for Practice in Health and Social Care module. Reflection is educational and is used as a means of self-knowledge and to develop using a process of feeling and learning by thinking about what happened and what could have been done differently. (Rolfe, 2011, p.8-12) I will be using the Gibbs (1988) Reflective Cycle to do this. In this model there are 6 different stages to look at to help structure reflection, the description of the event, your feelings, evaluation, analysis, conclusion and an action plan. There is more than one model

The topic you have chosen to analyze and research about is very interesting Some mistakes I believe I found are within the APA format. I believe that the title page only needs to state the title of the paper, your first and last name, and Coastal Carolina Community College according to the APA style. The running head should be in Times New Roman 12-point font as well. I noticed in the peer review you gave me, you found that the title page included the class and name of the instructor as well. I will be sure to contact the instructor for clarification and let you know the results! The only instance of second person I noticed was in the sentence, “As you can see, people with Alzheimer’s experience more abuse than those without Alzheimer’s.”, found under the heading, “Real Life Study on Abuse in Nursing Homes”, which can be taken out to say, “People with Alzheimer’s experience more abuse than those without Alzheimer’s”. However, I believe that the other uses of the word “you” found in Table 2 are acceptable. Great job with your rough draft and good luck with the

Could you give me advice as to what I should correct in APA errors, and writing errors, so I can hopefully get full credit in this area next time. I have to admit I was not really sure what you wanted with this assignment I hope to do better next time. I have attached a copy for word formatting and pasted a copy.

My partner mentioned that I could beef up my introduction and conclusion. This was something that I noticed as well. I have a hard time writing introductions and conclusions. I added more background information to the introduction and tried to end my paper in a better way. My partner also made note that my paper did not flow very well. She mentioned that I should link my paragraphs. I did notice this in my writing and made a point to go back and fix this in my paper. I wanted to link my topics so they did not just stand alone and they could be connected to each other. Before my paragraphs were stand alone paragraphs and went back and linked them together in a way that makes sense. My partner also made note that I needed to correct my first footnote. I went back and corrected my footnote and fix my bibliography as well. I tried to make my ideas flow in a way that also made sense. My partner pointed out that parts of the paper just jumped from one idea to the next. I went back to make the ideas flow more continuously. I appreciate that my partner said I did an excellent job of cutting to the chase and saying my arguments in a direct manner. I would like to think that I took the criticism of paper seriously and went back into my paper and made the appropriate

D-This writer met with the patient as she requested to see a Supervisor. According to the patient, she cannot stay to see her assigned counselor, Janice. When questioned as to why she is unable to see her counselor, the patient response was, " My mother is in a wheelchair and left alone with my son.....I have to go home." Supervisor reviewed the patient's alerts as the patient have a scheduled BAC and tested positive on 5/16/2017. This writer questioned the patient about this matter. The patient then says, " I am aware about this and the need to attend the alcohol group. I am willing to do the group session tomorrow." Supervisor called the patient assigned counselor to seek permission about releasing the HOLD on her behalf whereas it can be

 In the discussion, quotes have been used properly and been fully analyzed. Great ideas are also provided, but there are several grammatical errors. The author’s name has been spelling incorrect at beginning of the discussion. Maybe you should also split the discussion into several paragraphs instead of one to make it looks better. I

Good Afternoon Inna, Thank you for your response. You are correct in the punctuation and grammar. Rereading and constructively reviewing grammar and punctuation will be done Some issues like the Illustration versus Table I have not yet found in the APA manual but i know now and I have changed that. No changes in my methodology, except maybe only passing out the survey once versus twice. You and I had spoke of only passing it out one time to the staff, but it was after the approval. This is to late to resubmit, so I will continue as written in the IRB approval.

Shortly after becoming a supervisor I noticed we had 35 laptop computers that were not using due to our forms were all in paper format. I volunteered to make a current paper forms into electronic forms. I had never done anything like this before, so it was an incredible challenge as a new supervisor to take on this type of a project, but I felt it would be worthwhile. I proceeded meticulously through each form ( 32 forms in all) for almost six months collaborating with several other supervisors as a team testing, solving issues and modifying these forms until we got it right. The forms were finally approved by Mike Gil to distribute to all the supervisors. We felt we had accomplished a great deal to improve efficiency and appearance of the department to our peers that read our reports. To this day I update the forms for the department and take feedback from my peers, as well as the departments we serve to make them the best they can be.

Thank you for your feedback regarding my assignments that I have competed over the past two weeks. I appreciate the resources that you have sent me as I have used paperrater.com and citation machine, and will continue to use any other site or resource that you recommend. I can assure you that even though I have not met your high standards yet it is not due to the lack of effort. I pride myself on my hard work ethic and strive to excel in areas that challenge me; in this case being APA format. Once again that you for your feedback and you have my word that I will have my maximum effort each week.

Many times during class I have taken notes and realized that the concepts we are learning can be applied to the relationships within the job I am in right now. When I learned about culture, I was learning how to best communicate and understand others as an individual or group. In learning about a conflict I was having problems with a few coworkers and not understanding why they don’t connect with the various cultures we serve. At times throughout the conference, I saw this class as my work relationship survival guide for this upcoming school year. It was great to be able to take what I already knew about interpersonal relationships and communication and assign vocabulary with actual theories to my previous knowledge. Throughout this course and conference, I have found many connections in the two most important relationships in my life.