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Creative Writing: Behind The Bellman

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Behind the Bellman, Tim observed the corner room door ajared. From inside the corner room, Tim heard Bryan Stankovic's voice. "This is amazing man. I'm recording this to video. Would you look at this fool? He's chasing his goat. This is hysterical!" Tim brushed past Bashir at the doorway, where he witnessed Bryan using his iPhone to capture the menacing storm. "My grunts are going to laugh their asses off, " Bryan said Stankovic was unaware of his door begin open for those to overhear. And he continued, "Right to YouTube. Damn it, I've got no signal! What the hell in going on? Stupid Third World country!" Tim shook his head from hearing Bryan's lack of concern for their own safety. There stood quarterback Stankovic mocking the severity of this natural disaster. They …show more content…

"So?" Tim said. Bashir spoke, "Kind of strange for you to see your brother's death place. Now, I hope you know what you're doing. And if you need anything, contact me first. Good day, sir." Tim stood mortified at the doorway, while Stankovic strolled up. "Dudes, are my sleeping beauties awake yet?" spoke Bryan teasingly, and continued, "One fucking storm, and all the phone service goes down. No wonder why we withdrew from this armpit." Bryan strutted by Tim into their room wearing only his black jogging shorts. While he approached Kwan, Bryan finger flicked the side of Kwan's earlobe, which caused Kwan to immediately rub it. Kwan looked towards Bryan away from the window and the impeding storm. Bryan spoke to both, "Let's get a move on boys. You heard that bellman. Eleven o'clock. Downstairs." Bryan continued speaking directly to Kwan, "Hey, Kwan. Nice tighty whities. What are those? The K-Mart special?" Bryan finished circling their room, while he stopped shoulder-to-shoulder next to Tim. Tim noticed Bryan surveying their humble

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