Creative Writing: Blood Brothers

Finally, he arrived. As soon as he entered the building, he saw the “Out of Order” sign on the elevator. He raced up the stairs and made it into the room just in time.

She quickly walks down the hall amazed at the artistry of relics coming to a factory sized elevator. She hops in looking at a single button on a wide panel.

He steps onto the semicircular veranda, walks from one end to the other, then returns to the entry. He fumbles with the key in the lock, and thinks he should have done this while Pete was still here... 'Well if it doesn't work I'll break a window and fix it later... The place is mine now.'

I then knock loudly on Mr H's door so that he is aware of my prescence and await his reply, he called for me to 'come in'. On entering the room I

There is a knock on Gary’s door. Gary puts down the phone and walks to the door.

“Yes sir will do.” With that the Commander saluted and did an about face and left the office. Commander Hardy knew exactly where the Marine Company commander was, they had set up a command post near the front gate. The purpose of that was to be able to react as quickly as they

Matt opens the wooden handle on the door that has an oval like shape made out of glass that he can see through with white symmetrical designs that look kinda like petals of a flower. I finally opened the door and say

The door that we approach was a light tan and even though you had to have key to access the room; it did not scream out, “I’m scary.” Once inside, you have a hall leading to an opening to a giant kitchen and on each side of the hall, there were doors that were open that they can ensure the patients were inside. There were also bar railing on each side of the wall which leads all the way to the end

We walked into the prison to see a dark entrance . we then went through a door that took us into a hallway . Mr.Kirwin then stopped to show me

Seeing as there was nowhere else to go, you shuffled over to the opening and frowned. It was dark and you could just barely make out a doorway to what was most likely another room. What really threw you off guard was how nicely the doorway was carved. An intricate pattern wove itself around the exit. Did that mean… someone else was here? At the thought of possibly being able to get out of here with the help of another person made you scurry over to the patterned doorway with little hesitation. The sleeves of your two-sizes-too-big sweater fell down to wrap loosely around your forearms when you reach over and grabbed the wall to peak around into the next area.

The further he got the darker and more moist the the hallway got. As he reached a door in the hallway he could

“WayWay!,” Jesse said loud, trying to not shout in case he woke the residents up. He scuttled down the path after his brother, who was determined to knock on this door. Up the rickety porch steps he went, it creaked and crackled under his weight.

We looked around the dark place that was rarely lit up by torches, I spotted a rope and some steps, so we decided to head to the steps. BOOM! A giant wall was suddenly in our way, it had a pattern like a bejeweled puzzle. We decided to touch one… BAM! The door

“This is so surreal” I stood gazing at the ornamental door at the end of the hall. Like everything else it’s covered in fake gold, faintly glistening from the ceiling lights. Slowly we walk up to it, keeping ears out for the sound of footsteps. The Ranger hides me from sight, forcing me in-between a large table and the wall. He slowly puts his thumb on the scan pad next to the door, waiting for it to grant him access. There is no beep.

He was so puzzled from seeing the mysterious door that he had forgotten about the voice that had come from nowhere. The first thing he thought to do was to look around for anyone and then hop in. He assumed that it was just the electrical system for the ride but he still wanted to explore. In his mind he was saying, “look before he leaped” but he didn’t, he just opened it slowly, while closing his eyes and hopped in. He fell and fell and fell and fell. For it seemed like three weeks of falling. Down, down, down and down he went until…