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Creative Writing: Fallen Angels

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I have no idea how long I was out. It had to have been several minutes. Coming to, I saw the reverend still preaching in the center of the mist and holding his large cross as a shield in defense against it. The mist seemed to be gaining in size as it concentrated directly on him.

I noticed the air had cooled as I could now breath normally. I saw Jason stirring and knew he would soon be able to join in the battle. Looking to where George lay, I saw he was still unconscious. I crawled over to him and saw his hands still clutching at his chest. I reached for his wrist and searched for a pulse. There was none to be found.

The entity had claimed another victim.

I was pissed now! George had always been gruff to talk to, but …show more content…

“You're a coward, a sniveling coward that has to hide behind some big black mist as you try to scare people. Well, I'm not scared of you. That's right, I'm not scared of you! Show me your real shape you son-of-a-bitch. Now!”

Sometimes, I should just keep my mouth shut.

The mist gathered in front of me, ignoring the preacher completely. I was lifted up high and held against the wall by some tremendous pressure. The room filled with its roars and it darkened even more than before. Inches from my face the mist started to form human features. A plastic face of a mannequin appeared inches in front of mine, only to be engulfed in a bright red burst of fire that singed my eyebrows and lashes. From previous newspaper photos, I recognized the face of the father who had shot his family forming next as it spewed out profanities.

“I ain't no son-of-a-bitch”, screeched the mist as it slashed out towards me. I screamed as I felt the skin of my torso being ripped open!

“You are a son-of-a-bitch, leave him alone”, hollered Jason. He leaped at the mist holding me, only to find himself thrown next to me near the …show more content…

Slowly, if formed into a small child holding a baby. As she looked down to see it, the child started walking in a counterclockwise circle. She tried to keep them in view, turning to follow them in their circular trek. The faster they walked, the faster she seemed to spin. Realizing she’d lost control, she attempted to look away, but found herself unable to do so. Then, a man appeared, a man I knew as her husband. He took the baby from the children and offered it to her.

She spit at them and screamed, “I killed you once and I can do it again!”

A blinding light, like a hundred spotlights joining together to form one beam, pierced down through the ceiling of the room. Through it came, well, I have to describe them as angels. I found myself saying, “George”, and heard Jason saying, “Jesse” next to me as we recognized who they had once been. They flew down to the mother, each grabbed a shoulder, and guided her up through the ceiling. I watched in disbelief as the family below also faded from sight right where they stood.

Immediately, the room was bathed in the sunlight of a mid-morning sun. We all were silent except the preacher. He started praising God, giving thanks and celebrating our victory. The rest of got down on our knees next to George's body, Together, we wept for our loss. Yet, in our hearts, we all shared the knowledge that he had ended up in the right

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