Creative Writing: Margot

‘"Margot." One of the girls said, "Well… ?" No one moved. "Go on," whispered the girl.’ This sentence shows when the kids remembered about Margot in the closet after the sun was gone and the rain started again. They are feeling ashamed at themselves for leaving Margot in the closet when she needed the sun more than any of them. Another quote from the story is “They walked slowly down the hall in the sound of cold rain. They turned through the doorway to the room in the sound of the storm and thunder, lightning on their faces, blue and terrible. They walked over to the closet door slowly and stood by it.” These lines are setting up a very tense scene as the children are walking down the tunnel to the closet containing Margot. This leads us to believe that the children are very nervous to let her out because they don't know what will happen once they let Margot out or the trouble they will be in for locking her in the closet during the time that the sun came

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Soon, she was at school and it was the day the sun would come out. But the other kids did not want her to see the sun. In the end they locked her in a closet and did not let her out until the sun left and went away. This story shows that the other kids struggled with understanding Margot.

My name is Kaley Purdom and I write to you hopeful to give you some insight as to who I am as a person. A few things you should know is that I’m very reserved among people and apprehensive when it comes to speaking in class and or making speeches. Although, when around family and friends I liked to be hysterical, outgoing and boisterous. Making people laugh and smile are always enjoyable moments that I get throughout my life.

The crowd gazed at the green-skinned woman in silent horror. She had already gone around terrorizing everyone in the square. Vella and Shay heard Oz whisper something to Glinda. The woman whipped around and looked at him.

The kids realized that Margot now must wait 7 years to see the sun, and they felt remorseful for locking her up in a closet. After they came back into the classroom and saw it was raining, then they all realized the deed that they had done was very severe and they were sympathetic for her. Once they went to the door, they heard nothing behind the closet doors. They

As the sun peeked through the blinds on her front window, Gianna stretched and panicked she was late for school. Then she remembered it was summer break and she could take her time getting out of bed. She wondered how many more mornings it would take for her to realize she didn’t have to rush into the shower and get to school. Instead, she contemplated what she felt like doing today. It looked like a nice day so probably the beach as usual. Just then her phone began sending notifications.

As William was riding his bike in the frigid and rainy weather, he saw Margot’s house. He dared not to even look by because he was so frightened by Margot’s parent. He remembered when he had accidentally “pushed” Margot in the hallway, but it wasn't him, it was that kid who was next to him. Margot yelled in a irated voice, “ Why would you do that!?!?!”

There was a long silent pause, but about five minutes later in a bitter and bleak voice with tears rolling down her cheeks. Margot uttered, “How was the sun?” All the kids looked down at their feet feeling guilty for what they had done to Margot. Then out of nowhere Margot fell to the ground in tears. She cried out, ¨I miss my home so much and the sun was the only thing I had to remind me of it,¨ the students stood in shock not knowing what to do.

In the darkness of the closet, only two blue eyes were visible, until one of the students switched on the light and saw Margot sitting in the corner hugging her knees. She wobbled as she stood up and cautiously slipped one foot out of the closet.

No matter how harsh she scrubs, her hands will constantly be left tinged with the never ending reminder of her self destructive ways. It defines her. Darkness and pain, and the absolute promise of no tomorrow. That's all she is now. She sits upon the edge of the rooftop, peering down onto her eventual fate. Ariana is broken, and she knows that full well. A half-empty bottle of vodka is warm beneath her palms—the only part of her that is—and she takes a long swig, wondering how much it will take to drown herself. She wants to be strong again; she wants to feel the adrenaline of confidence pulsing through her and stunning those around her. She wants to smile and let it reach her eyes. She wants to clean her hands— those dirty hands that have

The front door slamming let Bella know her mother and the new toy boy were home. She closed her eyes, inhaled and let it out slow. When she heard her mother’s door shut and the muffled giggles that followed, she made her way to her own room.

The rhythmic tapping of shoes on the stone path loudly output the faint sound of trees blowing in the wind like the sound of rain.She blankly stared at the stone walls blocking her from the kingdom. Her mind reeling with thoughts and plans for what would come ahead for her and her people. as she got closer to the kingdom, the smell of wood,rust and pastries wafted in her cold nose. She gained composure, watching her breath twirling in the air until dissolving into nothing. Two guards stood proudly in front of the large round gate. They both jolted in surprise as she came into view. They parted from the door to let the queen inside and they bowed to her, their white armor slightly glistening in the sunrise. She pushed the hard, jagged door and

I am doing well and I hope you are too! I remember meeting you in Mrs. Vera’s office. Thank you so much for referring Ashley to WPU. I’ve spoken with Ashley yesterday and she submitted her application and test scores to me. I am currently waiting on her transcript, which she mentioned that she has requested her Guidance Counselor to mail over. Academically, the way things are looking so far, I believe she does have a great chance of being admitted. However, she mentioned that she was suspended during her sophomore year. I am currently following-up with her high school to get some clarification on the suspension (hopefully nothing major).

Where are you? I’m in New York City in our small apartment on West 63rd where I live with my 2 kids and wife, Nellie. And I’m at the kitchen table.