Have you ever heard the story about my scar? Well, anyway it happened five years ago…
“Here” I said, to my aunt Ashley. I handed her the Tic Tac Toe board.
“Can we play some Mario now?” I questioned.
“Sure!” she replied. I pulled out two controllers, and a remote.
“Here you go.” I handed Ashley a controller and the remote.
“Can you turn on the movie player?” I asked
“I will turn on the TV after you clean up the mess we made.”
“Okay,” I jumped off the couch and onto the fireplace hearth. I started to pick up all the toys when, CRACK! Everything was black. It felt like hot grains of sand hitting my forehead in forever torture. I was screaming in my mind. A knot of fear started to grow in my stomach.
“N-no, n-n-no, h-h-help!”, I found myself moaning and whimpering in pain in the car. I heard the comforting voice of Ashley say,
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I felt a mixture of sweat and blood run down my cheek. Thank you, I thought. The knot in my stomach loosened and I felt a comforting hand rest on my shoulder. Mmmmmmmmmmmm. I listened to the steady sound of the car. Everything went black, white, and gray.
I glimpsed visions of light from up ahead, and then felt burning on my forehead.
“Mom, Dad... Mom, Dad.” I moaned. Suddenly, there standing in front of me, I saw my mom and dad peering down at me. That's not possible, I thought. They are in Switzerland. This must be some sort of strange illusion. They can’t suddenly appear! I forced myself to think this was not the real Mom and Dad, and they were actually Skyping at the ER.
“It will be alright” I heard them say.
“Just go to sleep.” I felt like I should trust them and then I closed my eyes and drifted off to
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