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Creative Writing: The Asylum

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The Asylum “You won't go in.”, He Dared. “Yeah I will.” I said more braver than I meant. “Then open the door.” he taunted some more. “Fine.” I open the door to the abandoned Insane asylum. As I pushed the door I heard the door creak loudly. I turned the flashlight on to see dust, flipped chairs, and mold on the walls. “ “Let’s go.”, he said. “I don't really want to, Tyler.”, I said in a worried voice. “You took the dare.”, Tyler said. I slowly walk in. I can hear the squeaking of rats. Tyler walks in behind me. “ Down the stairs.”, He said in a evil voice. He gave me a camera. Three hours before… “ I dare you, Bryan, to take a spoon from the farthest cafeteria in the abandoned asylum.”, Tyler said. Three hours later… “I will wait outside for your return”,”If you do return.”, He said. he closes the door behind him as he walks out. …show more content…

I start to walk down the stairs. I hear the squeaking of the floorboards as is it was howling in pain.‘Squish’ hear as I plant my foot at the end of the steps. I look down. I fell the acidic burn of vomit come up my throat. I swallow it back down. I see what is the remains of rat feces and urine.Not paying attention, I forgot to turn on my camera. “Okay, now that it is turned on, I can keep going.” I look at a sign on the wall that reads. “Cafe 1A”, “I’m looking for 2c.” BANG!I jump to see a cup hit the floor. With a man looking at me and laughing. He runs down the opposite end of the hall and takes a left.”Tyler” I say in a angry muffled tone. When I got my courage up enough to keep going, I started to walk down again.It’s so quiet. All i can hear are my footsteps. Flick. The flashlight is going out! Flick Flick Fli-.”Huh, no

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