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Creative Writing: The Cheetahs

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"You ready to have them eat our dust?" My longtime companion and track teammate, Kayla, prompted. She of course is referring to The Cheetahs, the only team to rival us, The 619 CVSD Flyers (Flyers for short) in speed. In all the races leading up to this, the 2008 California State Games, the Subantum (a 4 - 10 age group) girls in The Cheetahs and The Flyers are neck and neck to see who will win the most 4x400 relay races. Today, on the hottest day of the summer, where the sun is glaring down the backs of exasperated, apprehensive, young runners, today teams' wins and losses will decide their fate. "Of course!" Yasmin and Audrey, my other teammates cheer. They proceed to stop their warm-up stretch and sing The Flyers' anthem. "Who's …show more content…

Audrey, 3rd leg, is running now. She is doing well, we are in 6th, 5th, 4th place! She is nearing towards me, but the Alisha's 3rd leg is closer. "Get some popcorn because I'm about to put on a show!" Alisha whispers to me as she runs off with her baton in first so far. Baton pass. I feel the coolness as of the metal baton in my right hand. I sprint and I pass two girls. Now we're in 2nd place, the turn covered by a tent is blocking the view of the tent is coming up. I rush in neck and neck with the Alisha. The crowd hushes, while the announcers commentate on who they think will come out first. In the tent it is so dim you can only see the first few steps in front of you. All I hear is my steady breathing and steps; the crowds mumbles are blocked out. The end of the tent is coming up. A burst of sunlight. "And the Flyers' anchor, Melissa Ibarra, comes out of the curve first and on to the last straightaway. The crowd's deeply held in breath is let out and yells of encouragement roar from the Flyers' side of the bleachers. Alisha nears towards me. I speed up. I see her in peripheral vision. I'm closing in on the finish line... "...And The 619 Flyers after a bumpy start

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