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Creative Writing: Urban Sprawls

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London, England, 1978.

Moving from the city to a small town was going to be a big change for Jason and Sarah Banks. Their two children, Gregory and Elizabeth, had never known anything but the cramped, urban sprawl of the rainy city in which they had been born. Many changes lay ahead for the family, though nothing would compare to the changes that would soon occur to their son, Gregory.

Sarah was an attractive housewife in her upper thirties. This dreary spring morning, she awoke at 5 am to the sound of her antique alarm clock, which sat on the nightstand beside the Bible and a framed photo of her two children. Sluggishly opening her eyes, she sat up in bed. Her husband, Jason, rolled away from the sound, still asleep.

Reaching across him, …show more content…

He was conscious of the smell of coffee, bacon, and eggs wafting in the open bedroom door from the kitchen. He noticed the sunlight pouring in through the window at his right, and cursing under his breath, jumped out of bed. He threw open the closet door and started pulling on pants. He had overslept! Searching for his tie, he heard his wife's voice in the kitchen, "Is your father still sleeping?" she was asking one of the children. Elizabeth's endearing, high-pitched voice answered, "I don't know, but he's going to be late!"

When Jason emerged in the kitchen five minutes later, clutching blueprints and looking flustered, he found his family already up and dressed, ready for the day. Gregory and Elizabeth were sitting at the breakfast table, Sarah leaning over them, dishing scrambled eggs onto their plates.

"I'm late," He said by way of greeting and, laying the blueprints on the kitchen table, grabbed a cup of coffee and slice of toast, while dialing his secretary at work.

"I told you!!" his daughter squeaked with concern. Sarah smirked from her daughter to her husband with a face that seemed to say, "Well, she did!" Had they been trying to wake him up all this time? Jason was furious at himself for dropping the ball on such an important day. The line only rang once before his secretary, Barbara, picked up the phone and snapped, "Jason, where are you?” “Mr. Hoffman is …show more content…

A narrow window along the juncture of wall and ceiling revealed the spattering of rain drops. The sky outside had become dull and overcast. As the rain picked up in intensity, there was nothing but the sound of its calming patter, and the spinning of the dryer.

As she sorted laundry, the rain carried Sarah's mind to a memory of a day, eleven years ago, that looked just like this. It had started as an uneventful day. She had picked up four year old Gregory up from daycare after work, and chatted with her toddler, who was strapped into his car seat in the back, as she focused on the road and drove. It started to rain.

As the rain picked up, the windshield fogged over. The heat didn't work in the old car, and Sarah reached forward as she drove down the familiar route, wiping the condensation off the windshield with her hand, so she could see. When she caught sight of the rode ahead, she slammed on the brakes, seeing the light in front of her had turned abruptly to red. As they slid to a stop on the worn old tires, a thump in the back seat made Sarah's gut clench with sickened dread.

She turned to find that, unbeknownst to her, Gregory had unbuckled his carseat and fallen in the floor when they stopped. She cursed in panic as she, threw the car in park and, dived over the seat to check on

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