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This article brings to our knowledge and explains about the overall impact of tourism by taking the four species of macropodids (Onychogalea faenata, Macropus rufogriseus, Wallabia bicolor and Macropus giganteus) in a sanctuary as their study samples. A few negative impacts were observed on different methods of approach and study and so it is concluded that, tours in vehicles would be better to minimize those impacts rather than on foot. The study of this article proves to be worth reporting as it exposes and creates the awareness in general about the negative impacts on different species due to increasing human population and their approach towards them.
The title explains the study of this article and its findings but does not seem to be appropriate. The title would look better if it was made precise and had apt words that best suited the article describing its result.
The abstract gives an overall idea and the main aim of this article but has no background information or reasoning. The study sample species names are mentioned but it lacks the methodology of their study. It expresses a solution for the problem of the study but not a specific clear-cut quantitative or qualitative result. The content is too concise but still it conveys a message.
The introduction had the suitable information to the study and also it did introduce the topic. The aim was explained in well-organized manner but the hypothesis of the article was not clear.
The introduction appears to lack in structure and organisation. No initial description of research question with reference to what it attempts to demonstrate is present; this is firstly mentioned in the third paragraph.
You should develop information provided in P1. You need to consider why these links exist and why relationships are formed, explaining how they affect the organisations concerned. E.g.
According to Fain (2017) the title is written to capture the reader and inform them of the purpose of the study. The title of the article clearly represents the research report. The variable of interest is understood from the title. However, the population studied and the setting of the study is not stated in the title. An abstract is constructed in order to provide a summary of the research study and should include the purpose and findings in the study (Fain, 2017). There is an abstract provided in the
The title is specific and concise, it is representative of the research report. From the title the focus of the study is understood including what was studied, who was studied, and where the study took place. It is also accurate and unambiguous. The title also described the study design, therefore the reader was not mislead on the data presented.
The title may be better judged after reading the article.6,9 It should precisely and concisely reflect the content of the work, but does not necessarily give an indication of the quality of the article. Whilst it should not contain jargon or buzz words that are not directly relevant, the title should stimulate the interest of readers and encourage them to read it.6
The introduction is authentic about the seriousness of the aims and a clear statement of the research, the introduction is very well referenced. Nevertheless, the introduction could be broken down into two sections which would consist of a brief introduction to be followed by a distinct literature review where the secondary sources would be introduced. The structure of the entire is complete with relevant and necessary secondary sources.
The background and significance of this study are properly presented in the introduction. The research question is presented at the end of the
This article clearly identifies the aims of the research in the abstract and main text. By using aims, the results and discussion are simply interpreted
The first question, the reason for the availability of lands for tourism, can be explained by a number of factors. For example, the simplest answer is that certain lands were designated as worth preservation or other government sanctioned protection and as such, those lands were made available to anyone who cared to travel and see them. However, there is much more to the story that simple land protection legislation.
One of the most evident and thought provoking aspects that we see as consumers on a daily basis is the effect of sales tax. The effect of sales tax vary from the examination of how much this tax can increase our purchases. To why there are higher and lower tax percentages based on different purchases. Knowing that this tax is in place determines the actions of both sellers and consumers. With sales tax continuing to evolve and change certain bills such as the Remote Transaction Parity Act of 2015 have been put into place and action.
According to Merriam-Webster, sociology is defined as, “the study of society, social institutions, and social relationships.” While sociology offers a perspective usually about the United States, anthropology offers a new perspective. According to Merriam-Webster, anthropology is defined as, “the study of human beings and their ancestors through time and space and in relation to physical character, environmental and social relations, and culture.” Anthropology holds a comparative analysis component in study that sociology lacks. It is the comparative analysis component that makes anthropology an important lens to use when looking at human reproduction. Human reproduction is not a universal event, it varies from person to person, culture to culture. Using anthropology as a lens for the study of human reproduction allows people to understand a biological process in a social context comparatively.
The Travel and Tourism industry is still one of the largest single businesses in world commerce and its importance is widely recognized. The tourism industry is now one of the largest sectors earning foreign exchange. In the face of many benefits, many countries have started assigning due weight age to the tourism industry in their national development agenda. Tourism is an industry that operates on a massively broad scale: it embraces activities ranging from the smallest sea-side hotel; to air-lines, multi-national hotel chains and major international tour operators. Originally, non-traditional industries such as tourism emerged as a solution to strike a balance between ecology and industry
The title of this article is straight forward and clear. It is effective in describing what the article is about in less than fifteen words. One criticism
A Dissertation Submitted to the Department of Zoology in Partial Fulfillment for the Requirement of the Degree of B.Sc. (Honours) in Zoology
In recent years, a few large national hotel chains such as Marriott, Best Western, and Hilton have dominated the hotel industry. Travelers are familiar with establishments that exemplify dependability and quality at reasonable rates. Many hotels recognize the importance of brand loyalty to guests. In doing so, they have expanded their lodging options that are under one corporate name which includes a variety of hotels from limited service, affordable type hotels, and luxury inns. To help understand the tourism industry and the impact it has on the economy, this paper will cover a brief history with an overview, a SWOTT analysis of the Marriott Hotel, defining and addressing the impact of the real GDP, unemployment rate, inflation rate,