Criticisms Of A Wikipedian Report

Please look for not only edits but be brutal with criticism. Let me know if you think I satisfied this prompt *** when you find a website called grammarphobia

Nicholas Carr in the article, “Is Google Making Us Stupid?” argues that the more people use technology, the more it’s making people stupid. Throughout the article he mentions many examples where he proves himself correct. Google is making us stupid because it’s affecting our concentration the more we rely on technology.

After this semester of English 102, at Bristol Community College I feel that I have gained the skill to articulate what I want to convey to the reader in many ways. I don’t just look at grammatical error, but instead I look for ways to make my sentences more effective and concise. Nevertheless, I hope that this strategy will continue to help me improve my writing even further on in the future.

Olaudah Equiano had a very unique experience with the slave trade system. He began conveying his experience with how he was captured in his village by two men and a women, who kidnapped him and his sister. Their captors traveled with them for a few days before separating the siblings, and selling Equiano to his first master. He was treated fairly well, even when he ran away for a day and came back, he says his master “having slightly reprimanded me, ordered me to be taken care of, and not ill-treated.” (Equiano 27) Shortly after this engagement, Equiano’s master loses his wife and child and sends Equiano away to be sold again. He even gets to see his sister one last time before, again, they are separated.

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In the article “Resist the internet” author Ross Douthat suggests that as a whole modern society relies too much on technology, and that we are addicted and should consider practicing some forms of technological temperance. Douthat recommends making cell phones more of a social taboo, adding boxes at restaurants to collect them in while patrons are eating, or discouraging their use during the several minutes preceding a formal business meeting. Douthat also suggests that kids under the age of 16 be banned from joining any form of video gaming networks. Douthat makes several points that I agree with, like the temperance on use of cellular devices at friendly or family outings or the deposit boxes at restaurants for the devices, however I strongly disagree with his idea of banning children and young teens from videogaming networks and the use of laptops in college lecture halls.

1. I received your email about Mini Writing Assignment Three regarding your concerns about how this particular paper is baffling to you. Even though, you sent me this your concern a week ago, for some odd reason it sent to my inbox this afternoon. For the most part, I agree with you that the paper is unlike the paper that I have written before during this class. Actually, this is one of the worst papers that I have written during my educational journey so far, because the example in the course textbook signaled to me that I am basically supposed to write the paper from my perspective. For example, using no references and argue for both sides of the argument the best way I possibly can. Furthermore, you stated that I didn't submit the final draft either. Maybe, there is something wrong with Turnitin, but I did submit the final draft and here is the email that the website sent me:

Title of Primary Source: ACCOUNT OF THE SLAVE TRADE ON THE COAST OF AFRICA by ALEXANDER FALCONBRIDGE

Normally, I would attempt to refrain from using the words “I,” and “You,” but this being a reflection, I decided that it was necessary since I am reviewing my own work. I am going to examine my work by my Paper Rater score.

In “Anonymous Albert’s e-mail” we see various amounts of grammatical and structural errors. The errors are displayed from the start of the e-mail to the conclusion. For instance, in the introduction the Anonymous Albert greets his/her instructor by writing, “Hello! Miss Teacher” (Par. 1). Albert starts well with a simple greeting of hello, but the exclamation mark at the end demonstrates a strong emotional expression and seems t have a tone of yelling. The exclamation point might change the overall tone of the e-mail. In addition, Albert’s use of “Miss Teacher” is very vague and has a broad range. The individual receiving the e-mail may not know who Albert was trying to communicate with given that Albert did not specify who he/she was sending

Comment by Matt Search: For this quick review, I?m not going to mark grammar/mechanics errors: I?ll focus on the organizational issues we discussed at our meeting.

But, my writing will vary greatly dependent on where it is to be posted. In texting, I pay little head to correct grammar or punctuation. In academic writing, I’ll write the same sentence with only slight differences three or four times. When I write to post online, I mix the these two so that

Funk and Wagnalls New World Encyclopedia was founded in 1875, and the first edition was published in1912 containing only 25 volumes. Today, Funk and Wagnalls New World Encyclopedia is an easy to read information database that covers over 25,000 different topics. Funk and Wagnall covered the Hercules Greek myth, including the twelve Labors, and the death of Hercules. This encyclopedia began selling in supermarkets and eventually ended up as an online database and is still being referenced more than a century later. These volumes are available to students, teachers, and anyone else who is able to gain access to it. Although this encyclopedia is always being updated, many people have criticized it for being culturally biased because the authors

I would like to take your advice on my writing style. English is not my first language nor even second its third; I write on my blog site which has been read by a million people, but the problem is sometimes I face with criticism for my grammar. Often It becomes really hurtful. What should I need to do?

Operations Management by Heizer & Render. This secondary source of information helped us better understand manufacturing productivity, outsourcing, capacity planning, layout strategies, work measurement, inventory management and sampling. With regard inventory management we discussed with the stores person the tightrope walked between the cost of too little stock (raw materials, work-in-progress, and finished goods) and the cost of too much stock given that much of Hills Hats’ raw materials were imported. There were some