Csu-Long Beach Thesis

Like transforming from a caterpillar to a butterfly, my writing style transformed from something mediocre to something quite exceptional. In high school, even when I took advanced placement English and Literature courses, I was never good at writing. My writing would lack structure, reasoning, syntax, and a well-defined thesis statement. My inadequate grades on writing assignments lowered my self-esteem, so I assumed I would never enjoy writing papers because I believed I could never improve. However, since attending a university my writing style has improved far beyond my expectation. My EN 101 course enhanced my understanding of the different ways I could approach my writing. Also, it enhanced my comprehension of outlines to complete assignments. Investing quality time into my writing made a substantial difference because I became a stronger writer. Through the late nights, constant revisions, and agonizing head traumas, I learned that my writing is truly spectacular whenever I incorporate well-defined thesis statements, provide sufficient supporting evidence, and maintain a clear focus in my assignments.

I like to read books, play games with my son and go for walks. My main interest in life, apart from my family, is working in Health and Social care as I have a real passion for helping people and helping them overcome any problems they may have, no matter how big or small.

Question #7 Some activities I enjoy doing after school is play video games, take walks with my family, watching shows and movies, and also be with my friends.

Transferring from a two-year institution to one of the most protégées HBCU's in this country was one of the best life decision I could've made. The astrosphere at my HBCU is second to none. At the point when untouchables specify my establishment first thing that comes to the theme is the legendary "Marching Storm" or our world-class nursing program yet this is simply to give some examples. But with all these incredible trademarks I as an understudy still face worries about foundations with living arrangements, financial aid, and the absence of the educational programs field to consider in. These are just a few concerns to name that rarely gets the mention by outsiders looking in that I as a Prairie

Another hobby of mine is playing baseball. I play for Exton Little League and I also started playing at the age of five. My third hobby is playing outside. Whenever it is a beautiful, sunny day I make sure that I get outside. When I am outside, I usually throw a football around with my brother or neighbor. My hobbies allow me to take my mind off of school and have fun. When school ended in June of last year, I was ecstatic because I knew I was going to go on numerous vacations. The first thing I did over the summer was go on a mission trip to New York. This was a new experience for me since I am extremely shy and it pushed my comfort zone. While in New York, my group worked in Astoria, Queens, where we tiled floors and stained wooden floors. At first I thought that the mission trip would be boring, but I had fun and met new people. Another thing I did during the summer was travel to Lake Placid, New York, for a hockey camp. I stayed in Lake Placid for a week where all we did was skate. Although very tiring, the

I came into Norwalk Community College looking for a fresh start. I previously attended a 4 year university that became too much for me; attending school full-time, working 30 hours per week while trying to enjoy the college experience. At the cost of an “experience” I ended up failing most of my classes, putting my health at risk drowned by the tremendous amount of stress and just wanted to completely give up. Looking for a fresh start I decided to leave my University, and attend Norwalk Community College. Though this decision created self-doubt in the beginning, it soon came to my realization that it was the best decision I ever made. Immersed in an environment full of positive people, I was able to put my pieces back together.

Do you ever think that community college is similar to high school? Do you feel community college is easier than high school? Does it seems to you that it won’t be any rules to adhere to? If you answered “yes” to any of these questions, you will be in a big trouble. Students used to come to a community college after they finished their high school without knowing anything about college’s life; it has rules and regulations that should be looking for before starting it. Also, there are lots of things that students don’t know about them in the community college; especially in their first year.

         Outside of taking photographs I enjoy taking part in my hobbies in and out of school. Ususally you can find me working with my dance team for the highschool in the fall. Otherwise you can find me drawing, riding horses, dancing at the studio, working, or hanging out with my friends. I have a passion in everything I do and try my best in everything that I do.

If I could be doing anything in the world it would be a pretty simple thing, reading. Reading while I'm spread across a hammock. Simple, but very satisfying. My eyes would be glued to my all time favorite book that I was introduced to my junior year of high school, The Great Gatsby. The story approach is a brilliant image of the 1920's that could be my daily read for as long as I can open my eyes. I would be reading the book basking in the summer sun as the day passed by slowly, withering away by sunrays because it feels too good to protect myself from the light.

Outside of school, I spend my time doing a multitude of things. I spend my time being the captain on two hockey teams, working part time for my local YMCA, and studying for school.

toll on my reading habits until I almost completely stopped reading for fun in high school. Now,

Having fun is very important in life, so you don’t only have to do things you’re supposed to do. You can take a chance and skip a homework assignment and hang out with your friends and hope for the best. Or you can buy a powerball ticket for one dollar and risk losing a dollar and maybe winning one million dollars which is a great risk to me because it is little money spent, but a very high reward. Skiing

I have been writing since I have been in Middle School. I have realized that by college it was easier for me to write down my thoughts in order for me to remember what I have said or done. Writing out my thoughts gives me a sense of recollection, knowledge, and pacification that gets me through my day. I pictured writing to be as simple as jotting down a few sentences, but as I got farther in school I realized that there is more to it than just writing sentences. English has been my most difficult subject I have ever endured, but I have somehow been managing to make excellent grades and achieving all requirements. First in the essay, I will discuss my experiences in the English life that I’ve taken so far up until college. The second part will list my struggles in creating a thesis, a work cited, and properly citing my sources used in the papers.

Reading and music. Both of these are some of my favorite forms of entertainment. After reading Transfer of Power by Vince Flynn and the beginning of Six Four by Hideo Yokoyama, I began to see parallels between characters in the books and lyrics to songs I love. Both tell an engaging story that also be related to different forms of entertainment

Over the past few months, I have learned several different writing techniques. While all of the different types of papers were difficult to write, I believe that my writing skills have improved. In fact, I did not understand all of the assignments, but I did try to do my best on all of them. While I should have used more transitional words in between sentences and paragraphs, I feel that I learned a great deal. It is true that I have not had very much writing experience and the writing process is difficult for me. Sometimes, I do admit, it takes days to complete one assignment, but it will be worth it when I am a proficient writer.