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Dellasega Analysis

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I want to start my analysis of this article off by saying that I’m a psychology student, and am going for my PhD. In order to help others, and the premise of the study that was covered in this article is intriguing, and I would hope that some of the methods entailed may be embraced by the APA (American Psychology association). In saying that, however, I have some critiques of the writing of Dellasega. I’m going to start with the basics. The grammar of the article isn’t quite up to standard. There are few missing commas, quite a few awkward sentences, a one or two unideal choices of phrases, such as when she used “seventy persons” instead of seventy people, which made the sentence read a bit clumsily. Aside for the grammar, I have an issue

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