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I feel the stabbing in my stomach bearing down on me, like the cutting edge of a knife trying to penetrate through the thick skin of my stomach. The pain awakening me just passed the five o’clock hour. At this hour, the eery darkness of night surrounds me. Suddenly, I sit up grasping my mid section. The queen sized bed absorbing the trickling, wet drops coming from the base of my neck. My feet whip out of the white, fluffy comforter. Struggling to find my footing I make my way through the scatter of clothes in my untidy bedroom. I snap on the light of the bathroom and instantaneously the beautiful tile floors are illuminated. Instantly, I am filled with a sharp pang of discomfort, the knife penetrating my lower abdomen. Promptly I fall to my knees swallowed by my dad’s oversized t-shirt. The chill tile floors ease my burning skin as I lean over the edge of the pearl-colored toilet, peering into the smooth water. The translucent water is invaded with black specks, like fireflies that dart past in an instant. I notice with every breath the number of specks increases until darkness consumes my vision. Nausea crept from my abdomen and in an instant, the world is black as the night sky. Upon waking the ringing of church bells fills my ears, chiming high-pitched tones. My head pounding to the rhythm after receiving a blow from the unforgiving tile floors. The dazed rhythm continues as I slowly stumble to unsteady legs. I totter back through the disheveled bedroom in search of the pink cup filled with water. Hoping it would quench my parched throat I bring it back to the stool, and I begin to sip on the remaining liquid. Suddenly, I was lying on the forbidding tiles of my bathroom floor. My mind could not recall the past few seconds, cautiously I rise sitting perpendicular to the firm flooring. Effortlessly floating in the silky toilet water is my flower-covered pink cup.
I nervously rise to my feet feeling the sensation of a droplet fall onto my rigid, pale face. My mind frantically searching for ways to get help. A choked cry forces itself out of my throat, “Mom, I need help!”
But my trembling voice fades into the darkness of the large house. As I stand in my doorway, gazing at the creaky oak floors, I prepare

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