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In the story it say that Raymond always keep up with Squeaky when she does her running. It also say that when Squeaky was getting ready for her race Raymond copied everything she did when she was getting ready. I support my answer at the end because Squeaky realize that her brother Raymond was a good runner just like

Squeaky feels fortunate to take care of Raymond because she is able to make sure Raymond gets the respect and care he deserves. For example, in the short story “Raymond’s Run”, the text talks about how Squeaky would much rather fight the person making fun of Raymond than letting them talk. This exemplifies the fact that Squeaky believes Raymond is a good person despite his health issues, and no one should be bullying him. Thus, Squeaky feels the need to stand up for her “younger brother.” To add on, Squeaky believed that even if she did not win the race, Raymond can grow up to be the next best runner. The text revealed Squeaky’s enthusiasm with Raymond’s ability to climb the fence and run swiftly. This leads on to the fact that Squeaky

In the story “Raymond’s Run”, a young girl nicknamed Squeaky has to take care of her older brother, Raymond, who has a disability. Squeaky does not mind taking care of Raymond, as long as he does not meddle with her running, which is Squeaky’s talent and hobby. Dissimilar to the majority of people and their hobbies, Squeaky takes running very seriously. Most days her parents make Squeaky take Raymond with her when she is training. At the park on May Day, Squeaky enters a 50-yard dash while Raymond good-naturedly waited behind a

Then, we heard on the loudspeakers, 6th graders, line up for the run. So, I lined up with the butterflies in my stomach now multiplying. There were around a 100 other kids lined and I felt like I was the peanut butter being squished in a sandwich. A man went in front of us, and started the countdown to start. My heart started pounding out of my chest and my stomach felt a sudden ache. The man shot the starter gun, and we were off.

In the story, Raymond's Run Squeaky only job on the universe was to take care of her little brother Raymond. But Squeaky had a passion for running in relays so while taking care her brother Raymond conditioned and when I say conditioned it seem like she ran for decades. Although she took time out to practice she made sure that she kept her eyes on Raymond. In the story, it sated she made sure while running he stayed on the inside of the sidewalk. The primary reason she liked running was to stay in shape and build her stamina up I swear you would never catch this young lady walking. Squeaky would run so much that that her mom would feel embarrass taking her to stores with the family. Then that's not the only bad thing about it she also

Squeaky loved to run. For example, she said ‘’I run. And as anybody can tell you I’m the fastest thing on two feet.’’ She practices ant time of day practicing her running. Squeaky also, practices her breathing . Squeaky came in first place every time she did a race. She doesn’t like to do much talking she rather knock you down. And run if she gets a chance. Squeaky also, does not like anyone messing with her brother Raymond. She said ‘’If anyone has anything to say to Raymond they have to come to me. Gretchen was Squeaky’s enimie . But , Gretchen didn’t do the talking her sidekicks did it for her. She thought she was gonna come in first place. But, squeaky knew that she wasn’t . They did the race and squeaky didn’t know who won , she thought

Towards the end of the story Squeaky saw how Raymond was mocking her as she was getting ready to run her event in the race. When Squeaky had realized what Raymond was doing she had decided that she could help Raymond become a better runner. Raymond was as good at running as she was. She saw that Raymond was just as fast as she was. In the

Although, Squeaky Has won a lot of prizes for sports but what she realized at the end that she have to be the better person. And Gretchen showed her she was very serious about her running that Squeaky decided to leave all the other stuff in the past, Last but not least Squeaky

Squeaky loved to run she had so much dedication in fact she practices like it was nobody’s business. She always won races but there was one person set out to beat her and her name was Gretchen. Gretchen was a pretty good runner and practiced to be even better. But aside from Gretchen and running squeaky has a brother named Raymond who wasn’t exactly as smart as everybody else but squeaky handled anyone who would even try to make fun of her brother. Squeaky is usually the one taking care of Raymond but if she can she likes to get in a nice run once in a while. Near the end of the story a race happens with squeaky in 1st place and Gretchen in close 2nd squeaky then sees how very professional Gretchen ran and gained respect from her making the

I stepped out of my mother’s car into the sweltering summer air. I was nervous and sweat dripped from my forehead. My mom walked me up the concrete steps and onto the track where the coach was waiting. It was the first official day of 7th grade cross country practice. I had no idea at the time, but this was the beginning of a journey that would help me to develop into who I am today.

The adults chatted for a bit then we went home. That was the first day saw Geselle.

My mind was cleared and all I could think off was passing people. Before I knew it, I was halfway around the track and my coach was screaming “Dig! Digggggg!!”. I shot myself forward and kept this pace. Now it was the last straight away, and I gave it all of my energy I had left. Crossing the finish line felt great, even though I did not race nearly as well as I had wanted to. I was just happy to be there. Over the announcements soon after I heard that I had gotten seventh overall and I was very happy. There were so many girls in the NLL and I placed 7th out of all the 400 meter dash runners. Plus, I always had next year.

Not happy, not excited, I was absolutely astonished. Up till this moment, all it was was a dream. Now that it was real, it was just very difficult to comprehend. I was now the fastest 12 year old in USA swimming history to swim the 400 meter IM. Up till this very day, that label still is amazing to me. My coach immediately hugged me saying, “See, I knew you could do it. Great Job!”The huge smile she had and her extreme excitement was more than I could even muster up at that time. My teammates circled around me and congratulated me, almost as excited as my coach, Then, out of nowhere, the state of shock I was experiencing shifted to a state of pure joy and excitement. Next I hugged my mother, with tears in her eyes. “Mom, why are you crying?” I asked. “I’m crying because I’m so proud of you.” My only response to that, and today I know it was wrong, was “Oh God mom.” My twelve year old self didn’t understand how proud my mother was at that time, and I feel embarrassed and also humored that I couldn't see it at that

It was a day that I had been waiting for all season, why? Because it meant that the pain was going to be over and it was my final race to prove how good I really was to everyone and hopefully fulfill the goal my coach, school and fans set for me. That morning of October 28th I woke up really sick to my stomach. Nerves were taking over my body and I couldn't sit still. The ride to the course I remember putting my headphones in and zoning everything out and never truly coming out of it till after the race was over. I remember my mom hugging me and telling me how proud of me she was and that no matter how bad my shins hurt to keep running. My coach grabbed me before I went to the starting line and surprisingly said how proud he was of me too, but that it wasn't over so that could change. It was so cold outside and I remember being able to see my breath and worrying that it was going to really effect my performance. I could also see the

Squeaky had a love for running she ran every day with her brother Raymond. In the story it said that she was the fastest around expect her dad. As a result she always won the 50 yard dash. One year a girl named Gretchen moved in to town Gretchen did not like Squeaky. Gretchen hade two sidekicks named Rosie and Mary Louise both Gretchen and her sidekicks speeded the word that Gretchen was going to win the 50 yard dash. Squeaky new that she was fast and would be her biggest competition. It finely was race day and squeaky won but while she was running she noticed something Raymond was running along the fence with her the story says that she wanted to stop but she did not .At the end of the race squeaky looked at Gretchen of the race she looked