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First time? No. Last time? Possibly. The rays of July sun pound down, scorching my pale flesh, but I don’t feel it. Fear augments inside me; unsure my limits, I persist.
The lake gleamed in the bright mountain sunshine, which would have been warm if not for the breeze, yet all the campers are still full of joy. All except me. I stripp off my towel, revealing my pale, goose-bump ridden skin and a thin black bathing suit.
My mom is staring out at the lake, the shining sun hitting her sunscreen smudged face, looking chipper, she reaches down, to pet the dorkus, fuzzy not so white miniature poodle, Totoro, who reflects the same emotion.
I look to my dad, desperately trying to hide the fear that was spewn across my face; he looks at me and smiles, a confident smile, obviously not reading the terror I managed to hide.
“Ready, kiddo?” he queries.
“Yes” I lie, for I could never prepare me for the daunting task that lay ahead of me.
I fumbled to peel my shoes away from my feet, the warm, sunbaked sand creeping through each crevice in every toe, filling them with warmth.
I stick my hand in the snow melt that makes up the lake known as Gerel Creek. Immediately, I remove it, then soon replace it with my foot. One after the next, my feet carry me deeper and deeper in the frigid water. At this point, I am waist deep in it, shivering, though the cold has numbed all parts of me, from my waist down. Suddenly and unexpectedly, I plunge, kicking my feet against the rock, and begin to

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