Devry E227 Pg 141 Pt 2 Essay

722 Words Apr 27th, 2015 3 Pages
Joseph Azir
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3/28/15

Writing: Demonstrating the “You” Attitude [LO-1] Rewrite these sentences to reflect your audience’s viewpoint: * a. Your email order cannot be processed; we request that you use the order form on our website instead. * b. We insist that you always bring your credit card to the store. * c. We want to get rid of all our 15-inch LCD screens to make room in our warehouse for the new 19-, 23-, and 35-inch monitors. Thus, we are offering a 25 percent discount on all sales of 15-inch models this week. * d. I am applying for the position of bookkeeper in your office. I feel my grades prove that I am bright and capable, and I think I can do a good job for you. * e. As requested, we are sending
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Correct form: It would be best if you could bring your credit card to the store.

C) We want to get rid of all our CRT monitors to make room in our warehouse for the new LCD flat screen monitors. Thus, we are offering a 25 percent discount on all sales this week.

Correct form: Starting this week you can now purchase our CRT monitors at 25 percent discount.

D) I am applying for the position of bookkeeper in your office. I feel my grades prove that I am bright and capable, and I think I can do a good job for you.

Correct form: I would like to apply as bookkeeper in your office. I believe that you will find me capable as my grades have already proven

E) As requested, we are sending the refund for $25.

Correct form: We are happy to send you your refund of $25.

F) If you cared about doing a good job, you would’ve made the extra effort required to learn how to use the machinery properly.

Correct form: If you learn how to use the machinery properly, your job will be much easier.

G) Your strategy presentation this morning absolutely blew me away; there’s no way we can fail with all the brilliant ideas you’ve pulled together—I’m so glad you’re running the company now!

Correct form: Great job on the meeting.

H) Regarding your email message from September 28 regarding the slow payment of your invoice, it’s important for you to realize that we’ve just undergone a massive upgrade of our accounts payable system and payments

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