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Diffrences In The Poem 'Race'

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These two versions of one narravtives have many diffrences.The poem”Race” is more powersfull wit the words and visualizilation.The dictionand imagery in the poem show you how sever the beating the boys got.To show how bad the volince is in th epeom i have selected a direct sentence from the poem, “taking turns punching him in the face, cutting his lower lip, punching, him vomiting. Punching until swollen and dark blue”(55).I would ike to aslo include the dirsct sentece form the prose to show the diffrence of hoe diction is used in both stoired; “punched him in the face, in the stomach, then his face again, cutting his lip, causing him to vomit”(5).The diction”dark blue”(55), and “lower lip”(55) gives you more of an idea of how bad the teens

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