English 1101 Thesis Statement

The use of rhetoric is important, especially depending on your audience. Rhetorical devices are known for being used by Aristotle in 384 BC and even in today’s era where it is used by political leaders, spokesmen, etc. In a document written by Benjamin Franklin “Benjamin Franklin: Remarks concerning the Savages of North America” and in Red Jacket’s speech “Red Jacket Defends Native American Religion, 1805.” Ethos, logos, and pathos, along with other rhetorical devices are used by both Red Jacket and Benjamin Franklin, which is very important and can help with informing people, and even persuading them into side with a person during their speech.

Using persuasive writing, Wright begins to influence his audience that game play is a beneficial source of entertainment not a wasteful one. Playing video games increases creatively, self esteem and improve problem solving skills of the players. Video games are becoming test runs that appear or feel close to the real thing. Where you can control everything with added effects like magic or future technology. Games have the potential to exceed almost all other forms of entertainment media. They tell stories, play music, challenge us, allow us to instantly communicate and interact with others. Encourage us to create things, connect us to new communities, and let us play with people across the world. Unlike most other forms of media, games are inherently tangible. According to Wright young children spend their days in imaginary worlds, substituting toys and make believe into the real world that they are just beginning to explore and understand. Wright states that games are the result of imagination and that they consist of rules and goals. Generation of teenagers has grown up with different set of games. Teenagers use the scientific method rather than reading the manual first. Games today maybe a person’s only place to express a high-level of creativity and growth. Older generations have a lot of criticisms for games, the games can help a person learn to think on his or her own.

In E. Shelly Reid's book Ten Ways to Think About Writing she expresses the thought we have all had; writing is hard. It's hard to follow the rules and still be passionate about what you are writing. These rules turn writing to a chior instead of an expressive art form. Reid suggests that we rid ourselves of the rules and focus on three key principals instead, write about what interests you, show don't tell and adapted to the audience. It is this consideration of both the author and the audience that defines rhetoric writing. Reid uses several examples to back up her key principles, but in the end it all comes down to the writer. The author has the power to replace the rule with an idea and pick which ones to use and chose which ones

1. Describe the ways in which swing music and popular culture were interrelated during the time known as the swing era.

Play less and study more! Due to global increase in competition, kids today are forced to achieve very high grades or secure very high percentages. Students are so worried about grades and position that neither they have anytime for themselves nor for any extracurricular activities. They suffer from several disorders such as depression and emotional disorders. Academic subjects and extra-curricular activities complement each other and develop a well-rounded, socially skilled, and healthier student. There are so many possible extra-curricular activities that each student can choose one those appeals to him or her personality. Extra-curricular activities help to develop the whole student

Long ago, at a small village next to Roc-A-Fella peaks, there lived three young boys. Jermaine, Nas, and Kendrick. Kendrick was a descendant of the lightning district of the village, Nas was born and raised in the fire district, and Jermaine was a simple village boy who grew crops and raised cattle. Ever since the village was established it was divided into four main groups. The fire district, the lightning district, the village folk, and the All Mighty’s. Mostly all lived in peace until one day.

EMILY is a small commercial vessel operated as a passenger launch and skippered charter vessel in and around Port Fraser Harbour.

Normally when one thinks about observing a creative activity they immediately think of sports or the arts, their mind being flooded with images of dancers gliding across a stage, painters swiping their brush across a canvas, or strong-abled bodies dribbling a ball down a field. All of these activities are undoubtedly creative, but as American society has grown and changed with advancing technology, so has the way people are able to engage in creative processes and events. In the last fifty years, the gaming world has exploded, bringing with it a new form of creativity. From electronic gaming to board games and live action role playing games (RPG), these new forms of competitive entertainment have been laying the foundations for a new outlet of creativity.

The best meeting I attend where I felt most satisfied was about getting families organized for an upcoming deployment for senior spouses. The reasons I felt satisfied was partly because you could tell the speaker used the three-part analysis. He knew his listeners, military family members. He understood we already know the basic about the army and readiness for deployment. He understood that we were a diverse group that had been through deployments and that we wanted to know what was different about this one. The speaker’s thesis statement was excellent as it keyed in on exactly what he was there to talk about. According to the course text, “The thesis statement —sometimes called the central idea or key idea —is a single sentence that summarizes your message.” (Elmhorst, Adler, & Lucas, 2013, p. 259)

(4) “Again they must believe the thieves took plenty of time to fold the grave clothes and place them neatly to one side.”

Wednesday 14th October –Make a rough sketch for the research paper; thesis statement, strategies that I use for the research paper, constituents of text, a history of marijuana, the present situation of marijuana, expected opposition, numbers of the evidence to support my statement. (12am to 5pm)

What makes strong writing, and how can an author come to develop it? There are many aspects of strong writing, with some being arguably important than others. Some writers may put more emphasis on the different factors, such as including a strong thesis in an otherwise weak introduction, but focusing on each part and crafting each aspect to the best of their ability makes the writer’s work better as a whole. One very important aspect of effective writing is a strong thesis statement.

In researching the three sources relate to the thesis statement in order to providing an indebted study of information to support the thesis at hand. It also, helps to outline the benefits of the statement whereas, demonstrating public research to combat the problems of obesity and educating other for an interventions to prevent further health problems. Plus I believe the sources is credible to support the argument in question.

For my final essay, I have taken the time to write my paper progressively through these few weeks. For example, the first day I received my assignment, I began to construct the outline of my essay and started to create a web diagram of my thoughts and ideas. The second day, I worked on my introduction and formulated my thesis statement. The following day, I began to organize the body paragraphs. Lastly, I concluded my paper by restating my main points and addressing my final viewpoint. I set aside time to revise my paper several times making sure that I have met all requirements. Using my negative feedback from previous papers, for example “Cats vs. Dogs,” I have focused a lot on the mechanics of my paper. I received comments in areas that

Shirley, C.C.S. (2004) The Relationship among Eating Attitudes, Slimming Behaviors and Perfectionism in a Non-Clinical Population, Hong Kong University e-theses data base