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Essay On Civil Rights Of 1964

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Looking back at the research paragraph I wrote on The Civil Rights Bill of 1964 to provide background knowledge for To Kill A Mockingbird, I have found that I had many strengths in the writing, while at the same time there are areas I have room to improve. I have quite a few areas that I believe I did an outstanding job with this assignment. I am very pleased with my topic sentence because I find it to be getting to the exact purpose of The Civil Rights Bill of 1964. I believe I did this by creating this topic sentence “The Civil Rights Bill of 1964 marked the beginning of breaking social, political, and work barriers for African Americans and Women,” this sentence clearly introduces the main points of The Civil Rights Bill. Another part of my …show more content…

John F. Kennedy and Lyndon B. Johnson answered “who”, The Civil Rights Bill of 1964 for “what”, the name of the bill stated the date it happened itself for “when”, the topic sentence showed that this bill was made to prove the United States answering “where”. I answered why The Civil Rights Bill of 1964 is important in my conclusion sentence by saying “In the end, The Civil Rights Bill of 1964 brought America closer to being the land of the equal and free like it was supposed to be.” I then answered the question of how by stating the changes that the bill would make to America, although I do believe I could have elaborated more on answering “how”. I believe that my conclusion was effective, but I believe I did not make the sentence grammatically correct. I wrote, “In the end, The Civil Rights Bill of 1964 brought America closer to being the land of the equal and free like it was supposed to be,” and looking back at it now I think I needed to have put a comma in between “free” and

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