Set in the times of the Industrial Revolution, Blake’s The Chimney Sweeper is a powerful attempt to fight one of the biggest social injustices at the time: child labour. He illustrates the heartbreaking life story of thousands of kids through two different points of view, one is exposed in the poem pertaining to Songs of Innocence (1789) and the other one is exposed in Songs of Experience (1794). Both poems share the same outline; however, it is the narrator’s view the one that changes drastically between the poems. In the eldest version, the author presents the readers with a young chimney sweeper full of hope and aspiration whereas in the most recent poem the author reflected a slightly more experienced child that does not believe in …show more content…
In the second one, however, the rhyme scheme was not as defined and there were even some free rhyme verses. As it would be expected, this breaks completely the musicality of the poem making the verses sound sharp and losing all possible flow.
Both versions share a common idea that is widely discussed: religion. In the first poem when guided through Tom’s dream, an angel is the one that set the children free. After escaping the coffins, which represent the chimneys they have to sweep daily, the young chimney sweepers arrive in paradise, where no worries or sad thoughts seem to exist. When Tom finally wakes up, he comforts himself with the idea that once they die, the reward for all his hard work will be heaven. In other words, the only hope they have left is the paradox of having a life after they pass out. Blake managed to first create a very soft atmosphere in the first stanzas and then progressively darken the environment until reaching its climax at the end.
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In contrast, in the second poem, the chimney sweeper has lost all of the faith he had left. He explains how his parents abandoned him to live this life on his own. He even suggests that they lie to themselves trying to find comfort in idealistic situations that are very far from his daily life reality. The young narrator is very critical with religion for using their situation to win adepts
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In religion, Heaven is thought to be paradise afterlife and
“The Chimney Sweeper” (128): This version of the Chimney Sweeper is very upfront and saddening. The version that is presented in the songs of innocence is much more of a calm town and is not as straightforward, while this version is very short and to the point. In this version its very deep as the narrator basically just calls out the parents/church for doing these horrible things to the children. I really love all three stanzas of this poem because they all have a really deep meaning and Blake transitions through them very well. Reading this poem over and over I don’t know what to make of it other than it is an absolute horrible situation. I think it can be tied in to
Challenges are a part of everyday life.They’re inevitable and without them life is meaningless. “Chimney sweep” both Experience and Innocence are both a similar in tone by the author’s use of defeatist diction. Even though they have a similar tone, they have different experiences of their childhood.
The second stanza is almost like the first in the fact that it appeals to the same senses. It talks about the actions and the feelings of the child. It describes how the child would wake and wait for his father to call him. The second stanza also describes the mood of the house in the line, "fearing the chronic angers of that house." Perhaps that line is
Never mind it, for when your head’s bare, You know that the soot cannot spoil your white hair” (line 6-8). Also in the fifth stanza Tom describes his dream. “Then naked and white, all their bags left behind, They rise upon clouds and sport in the wind; And the angel told Tom, if he’d be a good boy, He’d have God for his father, and never want joy” (line 21-24). He dreams that after chimney sweepers die they go on to see God and live happily. The children just have to pay the price on earth before they have happiness, but they were all very hopeful. However, the children’s mood changes completely in Songs of Experience. “And because I am happy and sing, They think they have done me no injury” (line 9-10). The children are becoming more and more bitter. All their hope is being lost overtime. Now the children don’t think they have a plan for the future. This lifestyle has had a major impact on their life. Being chimney sweepers, being tormented and having to endure terrible conditions.
William Blake's The Chimney Sweeper, written in 1789, tells the story of what happened to many young boys during this time period. Often, boys as young as four and five were sold for the soul purpose of cleaning chimneys because of their small size. These children were exploited and lived a meager existence that was socially acceptable at the time. Blake voices the evils of this acceptance through point of view, symbolism, and his startling irony.
The Chimney Sweepers was published in 1789 and 1794. William Blake was the author of both poems that are named the same thing but are honestly completely different.
These are two poems about nature. Now they are talking about the same thing. Well, they say it differently, you see the first one is talking about how the sun is rising and it shines on every leaf and they use a simile which is just perfect. Then on the second one, then they use many, many metaphors which are ok, but they rhyme a little which is better for the reader and it is longer and so they make it more interesting. They are very interesting, and they make you want to just get up and go outside. So you can feel what they are talking about so should right now just get off the couch and go outside. Run around make some camping plans so you can go into the forest and then see all the beauty of the world. Or you could go camping in the wrong spot where there was a forest fire and so then you will see all the destruction and you will try to do something about it. So then will decide that you need to do something about it so join a group that goes around and helps put up signs that say. Fire Resrictions No Campfires No Barbeques Nothing that are a Fire Hazard But then people will get very mad and so then you will need to go and talk to your group and you will go and make new signs that
· But line 3 of stanza 1 becomes the rhyme sound for the first, second
How would we do a poetry explication on “The Chimney Sweeper” (from songs of experience) by William Blake? We would start by analyzing “The Chimney Sweeper” and breaking it down into our own meaning or interpretation. In “The Chimney Sweeper” there are two speakers the child who is found in the snow and the person that finds him.
“Then down a green plain a leaping and laughing, they run, And wash in the river and shine in the sun. Then naked and white all their bags left behind, They rise upon clouds and sport in the wind;” When Blake wrote these lines he was of course referring to the act of Baptism. Which is defined in the Bible as being a water ritual, used as a spiritual symbol. Through this process the sweeps would be washed clean of all of their sins and also be cleansed of all of the bad things in their lives including their jobs. “And the Angel told Tom, if he’d be a good boy, He’d have God for his father, and never want joy.” This line of the poem indicates that if Tom was a good child and did as he was told on Earth that he would not be forsaken by God as his parents had forsaken him in his former life, but instead he would have everything he could ever possibly desire and be completely content in his afterlife. “And so Tom awoke; and we rose in the dark, And got with our bags and our brushes to work. Though the morning was cold, Tom was happy and warm; So if all do their duty they need not fear harm.” Through these words Blake reveals hope rather than despair because the focus is on immortality instead of life as a sweep. “The little Sweep's dream has the spiritual touch peculiar to Blake's hand.... (Gilchrist).” As stated before Blake is trying to convey
being kept at home, or were sent out to get money for the family, and
The amazing aspect of art is that it has the ability to record history, especially the difficulty or strong emotion of it. The Chimney Sweeper by William Blake, written in 1789 and again in 1794, provides a reflection of a time of harsh, child labor. Written five years apart, the two poems have similarities and differences that are observable through techniques Blake uses such as, imagery, diction, tone, mood, theme, rhyme, size, and point of view.
“The Chimney Sweeper” is a poem written by William Blake (1757 –1827). His main aim is to expose the social defects in his age and the vices which afflict his society and to confront his readers with the dreadful suffering of the working paupers. According to Blake, the chimney-sweeping life is not a life at all; the labourer children have lost their childhood, their freedom, and their innocence. He criticizes the victimisation of children and the injustice of this oppressive labour. He shows how Tom; the chimney sweeper and other children suffer from long hard labour in addition to physical and psychological abuse. Blake insists that these children are living in abject and inhumane conditions of deprivation, misery and humiliation
Blake’s two poems are both told from a child’s point of view, which is different from many works and forces adult readers to realize the fault in society’s standards through the bleak eyes of the many unfortunate children.
The first stanzas of both poems establish that the children have been forsaken by their parents and were left in the role of a chimney sweeper. The Innocence poem’s rhyme scheme consists of two couplets per quatrain. The couplets create a sound similar to nursery rhymes (which often mask dark events, like the Black plague). The Experience poem begins with rhyming couplets in a quatrain, but switches to ABAB rhymes in the second stanza. Some of the end rhymes are just barely off, which causes a slight feeling of uneasiness.