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The world in which I was raised in compares to no other, thus has shaped my personal attributes and dreams in a drastic way. From living in a city with a bad reputation as well as family that was gang affiliated; my parents knew that moving into an altered neighborhood would help shape me into the individual I would need to become successful and unique in my on way. From living in Watts and then moving to Lynwood I can say my stabilized home has given me a sense of appreciation towards my parents’ hard work to provide for my sibling and I. This sense of appreciation motivates me to push myself to surpass any boundaries and strive for excellence and none the less. With that thought, knowing the hardships and obstacles my parents conquered, the sky is my only limit and with college much more can be achieved, especially with the motivation I have to succeed. Living in a dominantly Hispanic community, many of my peers as well as friends and family have fallen under stereotypes that are used to categorize Hispanics. I on the other hand, take criticism such as, “nothing good comes out of Lynwood” and do everything in my power to prove it wrong. My motivation, determination, and ambition to make my parents proud are the heart of …show more content…

Though the kids weren’t any younger than I am they treated me with respect as I did to them this helped me better my leadership skills. I am very proud of this achievement due to the fact I proved many people wrong, and that what I plan on doing in the future as well. Many people, even family doubt I will be accepted to a University that is why I will use this accomplishment as an inspiration for me to demonstrate I can prove people wrong. I pursue an uplifted vibe and carry positive attitudes towards everything. When I would coach, and my team was to face defeat, instead of being put down I would tell them to learn from their mistakes just as I

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