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Examples Of Syntax In Mrs Dalloway

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Stifled Expression Post Rifle Aggression The syntax of Mrs. Dalloway consists mainly of loose sentences which progress at an irregular pace. Important information is often merely touched upon, and then abandoned in favor of an anecdote. The lack of structural variation from the complex multi-clause sentences in pivotal moments of the novel parallels the inability of the characters to express their socially taboo traits by neglecting to syntactically emphasize their controversial characteristics.
Modern culture is intolerant of homosexuality; consequently, Clarissa Dalloway addresses her intimate moments with Sally Seton in the same syntax with which she addresses everyday occurrences. Clarissa remembers what she claims is “the most exquisite …show more content…

During his time in the service Septimus became particularly close with one of his officers. Septimus “drew the attention, indeed the affection,” of Evans; such a relationship between a commanding officer and a subordinate is asymptomatic of the typical military experience (86). The comparison of their relationship to that of “two dogs playing on a hearth-rug” highlights the playful and warm-hearted nature of their relationship (86). Despite this implication that the two soldiers harbored unorthodox appetite, the syntax of the passage neglects to emphasize the importance of this same-sex bond to the characterization of Septimus. The section continues on with an even tempo, noting that Evans and Septimus could be found “growling good-temperedly” at each other, and that they had to “be…share, [and] fight” together, and then flowing seamlessly into Lucrezia’s opinion of Evans (86). The lack of elaboration upon the torrid relationship between Septimus and Evans parallels Septimus’s difficulty speaking about Evans. Septimus often sees and speaks with the apparition of his companion, and suffers from these appearances because he unsuccessfully conveys the emotional distress caused by the death of Evans. Septimus remembers that at the moment of his partner’s death he “congratulated himself upon feeling very little and very …show more content…

Modern culture holds soldiers to a high standard of emotional fortitude. They are expected to emerge from war triumphantly and confidently, but this notion is far from reality. Septimus Warren Smith is a shell shocked veteran, suffering from post-war “thunder-claps of fear,” who criticizes the apathy of modernist society. He is incapable of communicating his troubles to those who are enthralled with modern culture (87). Lucrezia notes that “the English are so silent,” however this silence is not defined as the absence of speech, it refers to the absence of substance (88). The English are capable of speech and yet incapable of transmitting significance. The loose sentence structure and the rambling form underline Septimus’s inability to efficiently broadcast his thoughts. The repetition of the phrase “he could not remember it,” reiterates the inability of Septimus to express his very complex emotions (98). The war has made him so lost within his own thoughts that he cannot clearly conclude how to begin to convey the anguish associated with the loss of Evans. The anxiety caused by the lack of catharsis builds up within Septimus. This intense depth of emotion directly contrasts the shallow understanding of society. The modern lifestyle and technology consume the common people of London

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