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First Quarter Reflection Paper

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After 1st Quarter, I decided to get on an elevator that would take me to a higher level. I’m the type of person who usually takes the stairs to get where I want to go because I like making progress gradually. After first quarter, I decided I needed to get to a higher level quicker than taking the stairs would allow. I knew that I did not meet my expectations first quarter, and I did not want to continue down that path. I made changes second quarter using what I learned first quarter. I set aside more time to write and edit my major assignments, which is something I made the mistake of not doing initially. I have also become more aware of word count. After finishing my essay, I now go back to see what words and/or phrases I can remove in …show more content…

These are the students that consider themselves “cooler” based on their brand-heavy attire.” I realized that this was a hasty generalization and that it wouldn’t support my argument the way it should. If anything, it might result in others disagreeing with my argument due to the ignorance and imprecision. Another fallacy that stuck with me was “students would not judge each other based on apparel because everyone would be wearing the same attire.” This begs the question and is too much of a generalization, therefore I took it out and stuck with the points I had clear evidence for. To add, I took out a good chunk of the introduction in my Original Argument composition to ensure that it would get to the claim quicker. The use of too many words and examples in the introduction made the claim unclear because it took so long to get to it. By taking out more phrases such as “a major contributing ideology” and simplifying them to just “ideology” in the introductory paragraph, I was able to reduce the word count and have the piece sound more precise. In the end, my introductory paragraph went from being twenty lines long to fourteen lines long. This is where I stepped onto the elevator. By reducing the word count the claim was clearer and the evidence was more precise. It also made it

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