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My humanities semester one artifact is an essay analyzing The Narrative Life of Frederick Douglass. To begin the essay, I started by reading the book and annotating in general about slavery and its dehumanizing effect. Once I was done, I began by outlining for the prompt about the hardships Douglass faced and how he overcame them. When outlining I first thought about the subclaims that related to the prompt, then wrote a thesis that was supported and was connected to all of the subclaims. I found evidence that supported my subclaims and elaborated on how the evidence connected to the subclaim and ultimately supported the thesis. Once the outline was done, I began my first draft. The main purpose
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Before writing this essay, I struggled in embedding quotes and paraphrasing my evidence. I would often get delta’s(improvements) about making my evidence less direct and simply copied from the text. So, while writing and revising this essay I worked on making my topic sentence fluidly transition into my evidence without saying “In the book…” or “The author says…”. I feel that by doing this I made my essay seem much more natural and more fluid. Also when writing this essay and reading Douglass’s book, I learned a lot about slavery. By reading on how Douglass dealt with slavery and watching him slowly build his argument against it was very illuminating and went straight to the heart of slavery as it was a first person account. I learned from Douglass that the only true counter to slavery was education. In slavery, the slaves are not only deprived of food but also of knowledge. By keeping the slaves in the dark, the slave owners were able to make sure that the slaves remained content with their life and didn’t try to revolt or to escape. After reading this I realized the importance of education, not just in how it relates to slavery but also today. Without a high school diploma or even a Bachelor's degree, it is really hard to make enough money to sustain yourself. So, in writing this essay I improved my writing skills by learning how to embed
Frederick Douglass’ autobiography, Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass, An American Slave offers a depiction of slavery like very few before him, from his firsthand accounts. Douglass wanted to show his opposition to slavery and knew he would meet many criticisms. Due to this criticism, he had to mask much of his work with irony. Some of his works are obvious and others are a bit harder to see. The more difficult ones were put in place by Douglass in order to provide a deep and profound statement, without arousing too much opposition. If he had he would have faced much more threats than he did. He not only
Slavery is a humongous topic involving both slaves and former slaves. The Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass, an American Slave Story is one such story. Douglass suffered punishments, and watching others get punished, he uses those experiences to make his argument against slavery.Douglass’ tone in the narrative is sarcastic and dark. Frederick Douglass successfully uses vast quantities of rhetorical devices, illuminating the horror and viciousness of slavery, including the need to eliminate it.
In a Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass: An American Slave written by himself, the author argues that no one can be enslaved if he or she has the ability to read, write, and think. Douglass supports his claim by first providing details of his attempts to earn an education, and secondly by explaining the conversion of a single slaveholder. The author’s purpose is to reveal the evils of slavery to the wider public in order to gain support for the abolition of his terrifying practice. Based on the purpose of writing the book and the graphic detail of his stories, Douglass is writing to influence people of higher power, such as abolitionists, to abolish the appalling reality of slavery; developing a sympathetic relationship with the
Purpose: Douglass wrote this book when slavery was still a normal and acceptable lifestyle in the US. Through his own sufferings as a slave, Douglass wants to show the American people the true injustices of slavery from the perspective of a former slave. That way,
One of the strongest pieces of evidence the author uses in support of their argument is, “At a time like this, scorching irony, not convincing argument, is needed… For is not light that is needed, but fire; it is not the gentle shower, but thunder… The feeling of the nation must be quickened; the conscience of the nation must be roused; the propriety of the nation must be startled… and its crimes against God and man must be proclaimed and denounced.” What Douglass tries to accomplish is to tell the citizens that words will not make a difference if they want change. Only violence can make an impact because the slaves’ voices are not really being heard. This evidence is strong because Douglass attempts to use the rhetorical appeal of pathos in
Slavery was an embarrassing time in America’s history. In 2016, slavery has become a distant memory. It’s easy for us to admit that slavery is wrong but, in Frederick Douglass’s time no one thought that it was. Frederick Douglass went on to write books and give speeches in hope that one day all slaves would be free. In the book called “The Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass”, he attempts to shine light on the American Slave system in the 1800’s.
Douglass passionately gave his opinion saying such things as, “… To him (the slave) your national greatness, swelling vanity; your sounds of rejoicing are empty and heartless… your shouts of liberty and equality, hollow mockery… a thin veil to cover up crimes, which would disgrace a nation of savages.” This quote encompasses the hurt, and mourning the slaves were going through on this so-called Independence Day. This brings us to our next theme, which is hypocrisy. In our previous reading of the Declaration of Independence, all men were supposedly created equal (Grafton). It is quite obvious that this promise was unfortunately unfulfilled for slaves and women. My question for the class is, “ What arguments Douglass make that prove slavery is unjust and that the slaveholders are essentially guilty of
During the mid-19th century, the issue of slavery divided the nation between two firmly rooted camps, the southern slave owners and the northern abolitionists. As authors and activists attempted to shed light on the issue of slavery, they appealed to the millions of citizens who were in between camps, whether due to a lack of knowledge or lack of importance in their daily lives. The story of Frederick Douglass is one such literary work that helped inform American citizens on the horrors of slavery, offering a first-hand account as Douglass rose from a slave to an educated free man. Within his narrative, Douglass describes his life as a slave and transition into American society with newfound freedom, highlighting the dehumanizing results of slavery. Furthermore, Douglass appeals to the three Aristotelian appeals throughout his novel, synthesizing the argument that slavery should be abolished. Specifically, Douglass makes use of vivid imagery that appeals to readers’ pathos, inciting horror in his audience at the sight of atrocities committed by slave owners. Moreover, Douglass references a number of prominent literary works when forming analogies between slavery and history, appealing to readers’ ethos by illustrating his education and increasing the credibility of his argument. Finally, Douglass utilizes a parallel sentence structure to appeal to readers’ logos by presenting his arguments in a cohesive and logical manner when writing of the slave’s lack of autonomy over their own lives .
In The Life of Frederick Douglass An American Slave, written by himself the author asserts that the way to enslave someone is to keep them from learning at all. Douglass supports his claim by, first, when Frederick was small he was never able to tell his age or the date, and secondly, they were never allowed to be taught how to read that was something always hidden from him as a young child. The author’s purpose is to inform the reader that as a slave there were so many things they were not allowed to have that we may take for granted, in order to make it very clear that we should not take our education and opportunities for granted. Based on The Life Of Frederick Douglass An American Slave, Douglass is writing for the white people who believed that slavery was right, he wanted to make it very clear that the slaves and Douglass had nothing handed to them.
The struggle of slavery was a never ending battle which could not have been won by standing idly by, watching it’s mass destruction take place. Frederick Douglass, born a slave in 1818 stated “Without a struggle, there can be no progress”. This quote does an excellent job of capturing the essence of his memoir, “Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass.” Through recounting his brutal experiences as a slave, Frederick Douglass utilizes rhetorical strategies in the form of rhetorical imagery, anecdote, and simile to expose the horrors of slavery to the uninformed population of the United States.
Here Douglass shows that slavery was not a constant source of pain and suffering: “I was not old enough to work in the fields, and there being little else than field work to do, I had a great deal of leisure time,” (Douglass 71.) This is effective in proving his point because it allows him to show the true horrors of slavery and not be lopsided in his views.
This advocacy to educate slaves existed throughout Douglass’s whole life, not just after he obtained physical freedom from slavery. Douglass stated “accordingly [I] devoted my Sundays to teaching these my loved fellow-slaves how to read” (272). This cultivation of learning by Douglass occurred years after he decided that he wanted to become free but before his actual cessation of being in the bonds of slavery. Therefore, this teaching is seen as exemplifying one of Douglass’s points that he was trying to make in the Narrative: advocating for education in slaves is inherently associated with their freedom. Douglass wanted to free slaves because he had witnessed its horridness first hand. Also, Douglass shows that education is required for a slave to become freed in his Narrative, not just physically freeing them. He castigated the Underground Railroad, an organization that helped to free slaves from their physical bonds. After escaping, Douglass affirmed that “[the Underground Railroad members] do nothing towards enlightening the slave…” (281). Consequently, Douglass shows that physical freedom is not enough; he is trying to prove in his Narrative that educational knowledge must be obtained to be wholly free. Long after escaping, he spread the importance of education by writing books and giving speeches as an abolitionist. In writing
Patrick Henry once said, “give me liberty, or give me death.” In the eyes of Frederick Douglass and countless others enslaved, this took on a much deeper meaning to them. “It was doubtful liberty at most, and almost certain death is we failed.” [51] Frederick Douglass was one of the most commonly known slaves to have existed. Slavery has been around since the 1700s, but the subject of slavery is controversial because it not only includes information written from former slaves, but information acquired from historians. The question that has with stood the test of time is, “are these encounters that have been written out, exaggerated or the whole truth and nothing but the truth?” In the early 1800’s Frederick Douglass was born in Tuckahoe, Maryland, and grew up on Colonial Edward Lloyd’s plantation. Children would be separated from their mothers before they were twelve months in age-Frederick too was separated from his mother. As a result of entering slave-hood at an early age, he did not know his birthdate (like most slaves). Frederick Douglass’s account on slavery could be seen as biased as a result of first hand experiences with being held as a slave. Although, Douglass is able to be direct our thoughts to these experiences in such a light, you feel as if you are witnessing it happen right before you. Because of Douglass’s quest for freedom, his daring attitude, and determination to learn, he shows us the way through American Slavery in his eyes. Douglass provides
Frederick Douglass, a famous abolitionist leader and writer, was born into slavery in the early 1800’s. Douglass published many books and papers illustrating the time in which he lived, all of them portraying his perspective of growing up as a slave in Talbot County, Maryland. During this time slaves had no rights. They were bought and sold constantly, and were consider property the slave owners. Slaves mainly worked in the fields, but Douglass on the other hand, was lucky enough to live as a servant to the Master and his family. In his essay, “Learning to Read and Write”, Frederick Douglass described the events that took place in his early childhood and adolescence years that helped him acquire the skills to learn to read and write. These skills are ultimately what enabled Douglass to free himself from slavery and pursue his own passions to fight slavery with his words. In Contrasts, Peter Elbow is a modern day English professor who has published numerous essays regarding methods on how to improve People’s writing skills. One of his methods is known as “Freewriting.” Although these two essays were published nearly two centuries apart, they contain similar methods of organization and purposes within their writing. The authors used a step-by-step method of writing where each supporting detail adds the previous one and guides the reader closer to the main principle of the paper.
Education is a key. Not many can find it, but those who do can unlock the door to endless knowledge. Abolitionist leader and American slave, Frederick Douglass, in his autobiography A Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass, contemplates the enslavement he endured while emphasizing the importance of education as a key to freedom. Throughout Douglass’s educational awakening and his realization of its overall power, he comes to understand the slaveholder’s evil doings in keeping all slaves trapped in ignorance. Thesis too wordy condense it & briefly incorporate rhetorical strategies he uses (repetition, understatement, imagery, diction, etc).