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Frederick Douglass Artifact Analysis

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Dear Family, Community Members, and CCSC Staff,
My humanities semester one artifact is an essay analyzing The Narrative Life of Frederick Douglass. To begin the essay, I started by reading the book and annotating in general about slavery and its dehumanizing effect. Once I was done, I began by outlining for the prompt about the hardships Douglass faced and how he overcame them. When outlining I first thought about the subclaims that related to the prompt, then wrote a thesis that was supported and was connected to all of the subclaims. I found evidence that supported my subclaims and elaborated on how the evidence connected to the subclaim and ultimately supported the thesis. Once the outline was done, I began my first draft. The main purpose …show more content…

Before writing this essay, I struggled in embedding quotes and paraphrasing my evidence. I would often get delta’s(improvements) about making my evidence less direct and simply copied from the text. So, while writing and revising this essay I worked on making my topic sentence fluidly transition into my evidence without saying “In the book…” or “The author says…”. I feel that by doing this I made my essay seem much more natural and more fluid. Also when writing this essay and reading Douglass’s book, I learned a lot about slavery. By reading on how Douglass dealt with slavery and watching him slowly build his argument against it was very illuminating and went straight to the heart of slavery as it was a first person account. I learned from Douglass that the only true counter to slavery was education. In slavery, the slaves are not only deprived of food but also of knowledge. By keeping the slaves in the dark, the slave owners were able to make sure that the slaves remained content with their life and didn’t try to revolt or to escape. After reading this I realized the importance of education, not just in how it relates to slavery but also today. Without a high school diploma or even a Bachelor's degree, it is really hard to make enough money to sustain yourself. So, in writing this essay I improved my writing skills by learning how to embed

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