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Gerard Jones : Violent Media Is Good For Kids

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In the writing of Gerard Jones “Violent Media is Good for Kids” is a very interesting essay in which he describes how violent media can help kids to overcome obstacles. Also, he describes that some kids that used to be shy become outgoing by reading comics, he makes his point by saying the kids who reads this comic, get confident by identifying with the superheroes of the stories that they read. He gave examples of kids that were treated with violent media, but I am not truly sure if this is effective in kids or not because in the examples that he gave needs more details on how they become effective in helping these kids with their problems, also this point will be more persuade if the author supports his examples with information of the parents of these kids that believed violent media is good. Gerard Jones fails to give more details about how the kids that were treated with violent media had a positive attitude towards violence. Jones argument on how violent media helped kids that were deprived of scenes of violence, he argued that were more positive towards these scenes. Jones gave an example of his son when he was in first grade. He said that his son was afraid of climbing trees, so he decided to read his son comics of Tarzan who are known for as rich in combat and bright with flashing knives. He says that after reading this comic for two weeks, his son gets courage of started climbing trees. Jones is telling the reader that just because his son gets identify with Tarzan, this comic helps him to overcome the fear of climbing trees. This assumption with little details makes his essay less persuade because he did no point out the details of how this comic really helps his son. This example is a good hook to the readers, but the lack on details makes it less convincing. Not only he gave an example of his son, but he also gave an example of a psychologist who make a researched with urban kids, but the deficiency in details makes his argument weak and less convincing. Gerard Jones gave an example of the treatment that Melanie Moore, Ph.D. a psychologist did with urban teens. She said, “Children need violence entertainment to explore the inescapable feelings that they have been taught to deny and to

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