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Girl by Jamaica Kincaid is a prose poem about a mother writing to her daughter and telling her how to do things. If by Rudyard Kipling is a father telling his son that if he can do certain things, he will become a man. These stories are similar and different in many ways, like their different formats, different points of view, and similar topic.

The formats of If and Girl are different. Girl is written in paragraph format, or a ¨wall of words.¨ The intro states, ¨ the prose poem is 650 words,¨ and, ¨the story is entirely one sentence.¨ This shows that Girl is written as a paragraph poem. If you look at the poem If, you can tell it was written in poetry format, with stanzas. This shows that both poems were written in different format, “Girl” written as a paragraph, “If” written as a poem based on looks and the way the poem says things. This, of course, helps to make the poems sound different. Since “If” has rhythm, it makes it sound more uplifting and high-spiritual, whereas “Girl” is like a list of chores, it makes you feel like there’s a big lump of “Why?” and makes you feel like you need to …show more content…

Girl is written as a mom telling her daughter how she is to behave. The intro states, ¨a mother writes to her daughter,” which means the mother was writing to the daughter. If was written as a father teaching his son values. The text says, ¨you'll be a man my son!¨ which shows a father is talking to his son. This shows that the poems have different points of view, “Girl” is from the mother and “If” is from a father based on the way of the writing and what the text says. The mother in “Girl” actually acts more like a father in my opinion, demanding and has extremely high expectations. And, like I’ve experienced, she may not know that she may be making her daughter feel bad about herself. The father in “If” sounds more like a mother to me, caring, loving, and supportive, giving advice of how to live a good, fun yet principled

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