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Gopro An Experience Analysis

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Expectation for Writing 150 Response Throughout these four pieces there is countless things that are evident and seem to be expected that we, as writers, know how to implicate. All of the writings had a story, something personal and meaningful to the writer that they thought was something they needed to share. They all were personal to some level, some more than others, and most of them taught a lesson. That being said, they all flowed smoothly from one topic to another, making it easy to read and enjoyable. They also had exquisite choices in words, they excluded weak verbs and had precise punctuation. The one piece I particularly enjoyed was called “Scarred” by Brianna Steiner (119-127). This is something I could see myself writing and has a lot of emotional appeal throughout. Her story is very personal and something I think most people can relate to, having a younger sister this piece is very prevalent to me. This piece implicated how simple things we do can affect others and gives us a deeper understanding of how we can take something simple in our lives and turn it into a story, full of detail and entertainment for the reader. Steiner also …show more content…

Within this piece the author describes a GoPro and talks about the many ways it is used. She does this with ease, making a piece that could be dry and boring, easy to read. The author uses many quotes from various authors which support her findings, giving the piece more structure. She also utilizes pictures to keep the reader engaged and excited about the product. She then goes into the pricing (bottom of page 114) and how the product has given armature photographers an upper leg. This allows people using the product to not have to worry about it getting harmed or taking care of it while they practice extreme sports. She entertains the reader, sells the product and also informs the audience all in one short

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