Gorilla Cage Response

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Overall, the essay seemed to lack flow as a result of a noticeable absence of transition words. The essay had bad syntax. Each paragraph seemed to be scenario after scenario and each sentence seemed to be idea after idea. For example, in the first paragraph, the list consisted of multiple sentences, instead of just one sentence with commas. “But they are few: Being mistaken for a wheat field by a cloud of locusts. Being buried alive”...“Interviews from film festivals.”, this seemed like an awful way to list ideas. In addition, the fourth paragraph of the essay was made up of only 2 sentences, one

Furthermore, I think the strength of my essay was my thesis and supporting ideas of the

Hello Rozhnaz! This writing looks better than the previous one that I revised; congrats! You also gain improvement in terms of the use of academic vocabularies in this essay. Some notes to be considered here are the minor things such as punctuation, redundant expression, and capitalization. Here are several takes on your writing:

Reflection: The hardest thing on this essay was finding good examples that could really illustrate the examples above. For working in this essay I did a short brainstorm for getting good ideas. Then, I made an outline and started doing the draft version. Then I got the feedback from my teacher and wrote down the final version. For getting advice, I showed every step for my teacher and also for my friends, for getting a good peer review and good advices. The best advice I got was one of my teacher, when I was making the outline, when he told me to change the

This exercise is considered an academic writing exercise. Quality of response, grammar, and punctuation are considered in your overall grade.

Second, I used tone to give the essay character. The speaker throughout the essay appears to me very haughty and excited. The quote “Now I have solved two problems, bullying and your failure in school. I should really write a book.” shows

Due to this circumstance, I hope that you will generously grant me an extension of one week for submitting the essay. I have already begun writing the essay. I guarantee that I will have enough time to complete it

The idea that was change the most for me is the idea I have toward people that mental illness that committed a crime. I used to think that they don’t deserve a second chance, even when they get treated in mental institute, I would not gamble the chance of them hurting other. Eventhough my opinion is not completely change I feel like I understand them more. Especially on the question why they did what they did. Which help me … think the first response paper is the paper that I can reflect on the most. This response paper shown how much my idea have change even with the stuff that was not relate to this class. In the beginning

This is Jarmain Harrell from your English 1023 class at the North Acadian BRCC College on Tuesdays and Thursdays from 10: 30 am - 11:45 pm. I know our essay rough drafts aren’t due until Thursday but I hoped you could take a look at mine to see if I did everything correctly. I added a few things such as quotes and a couple of sentences but the majority came from the six summaries I did. Was it okay that I used a quote twice in the essay? I used it in the Introduction and reword it in the conclusion. Is are the quotes in the correct place?

organize your thoughts. Then you may begin writing your essay. You may feel free to add additional

First of all I would like to apologize for this late responds to your comments. Thank you for your help and after re reading my thesis and conducting more research on my essay idea I came up with a new thesis. Hope you have chance to give me some pointers.

Be aware that every essay is guided by the perception of the person who wrote it. It is virtually impossible to be completely impartial and objective towards everything we analyze. Our life history continuously shapes us into thinking and acting the way we do; the place where you were born, the childhood we experienced. It all has an effect on our decision making process. Even our sex: male or female. Everything makes a difference in perception.

Your essay should be written in the first person and should include a personal, reflective discussion, but should be scholarly and include a carefully

In my week one essay, I discussed the importance of analytical skills and attention to details. “To be a good lawyer, it is extremely important to concentrate on the details that are overlooked or ignored by others. In order for a lawyer to be successful he must be able to analyze both positive and negative factors of a case and to outwit his opponent in order to prepare for future possibilities and risks.” Although, both the analytical skills and attention to detail are essential skills to be a good lawyer, I learned that ability to communicate is as important as other skills I discussed above.