Gramer Book Essay

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Luis Lopez
Period 5
10 April 2015
Exercises 1
1.

Louise projected the photographs on a large screen that she had taken at the zoo.
­On a large screen, Louise projected the photographs that she had taken at the zoo.

2.

Mr. Martínez promised in the morning he would tell an American Indian trickster tale.
­In the morning, Mr. Martínez promised he would tell an American Indian trickster tale.

3.

I pointed to the fish tank and showed my friends the baby anglefish, swelling with pride.
­Swelling with pride, I pointed to the fish tank and showed my friends the baby anglefish.

4.

Ralph Ellison said during an interview Richard Wright inspired him to become a writer.
­During an interview, Ralph Ellison said Richard Wright
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3.

All bundled up in a blanket, the baby’s first outing was a brief one.
­The baby all bundled up in a blanket had a brief first outing.

4.

When performing onstage, the microphone should not be placed too near the speaker cones. ­I suggest when performing onstage, the microphone should not be placed too near the speaker cones.

5.

To be a good opera singer, clear enunciation is extremely important.
­My instructor told us to be a good opera singer, clear enunciation is extremely important.

6.

To help colonial soldiers during the Revolutionary War, Haym Solomon’s efforts raised money to buy food and cloths.

­ Haym Solomon’s efforts raised money to buy food and cloths, to help colonial soldiers during the Revolutionary War
7.

Before moving to Sacramento, Pittsburgh had been their home for ten years.
­Before the Tommy brothers moved to Sacramento, Pittsburgh had been their home for ten years.

8.

While reaching into his pocket for change, the car rolled into the side of the tollbooth.
­While Mike reached into his pocket for change, the car rolled into the side of the tollbooth. 9.

Alone, the peace and quiet that followed the busy weekend was a welcome relief.
­When I was alone, the peace and quiet that followed the busy weekend was a welcome relief. 10.

When discussing colonial America writer, the contributions of the African American poet

Phillis Wheatley should not be
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