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It’s the start of grand final day. I wake up extremely nervous about it because of what happened last year. So last year we were in the grand final playing the same team (the dogs) and on the same ground. i was going for a mark, running as hard as i could to get go for it, but unfortunately, a player from the dogs comes in head first and headbutts my chest and breaks 3 of my ribs and we lose by less than a goal.

I hop in the shower and start washing my long blonde hair and think about today and how we are going to win this year. i get out of the shower slightly less frightened and have some breakfast. i jump in the car and my mum turns on the engine and drives to the opposition oval.

When i get to the oval i can feel my heart beating inside …show more content…

It started out was usual the same player dominated the centre but this time Craig stopped the attack and sent it straight over the back of his head but as soon as he kicks it a player from the other team elbows the back of his head and gets knocked unconscious. i charged at him a dropped him to the ground and walk over to Craig who is laying there life less and more of our player jump on top of the opposition player while the umpire is trying to stop it. It was …show more content…

“ok boys we have made it this far and i don't plan of bloody losing now. we are that close we can touch it, only you can change it, not the bloke next to you, only you so play the hardest you have ever played. ok?” “ok.” we replied. “OK?” the couch yelled “OK!!!!!” we scremed. I ran out onto the field feeling the most pumped I've ever seen. i was moved to centre and i was trying as hard as i could to stop the huge player from the other team. he got the ball and i was straight onto him and tackled him as hard as i could. i was the first person to take him down from our team but the job wasn't over yet. he hand balled it to some one who kicked to a forward flank who kick a set shot and put them in the lead. It was a back and forth battle, goal for goal, possession for possession and it got down to thirty seconds and they were up by 3 points and it was in there forward and they were about to kick a goal but someone smothered the ball and a team mate picked it up, rushing, he kicked as far as he could and someone in the centre marked it. ten seconds left and i make a lead into the forward 50 and take a diving mark. I was about to kick it but the buzzer went. i had to kick a goal to win. it was all down to this. 50 out and i was lining up, the whole team was relying on me. i take a deep breath and start running in, blocking out all the booing form the other team i

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