Greets Kilsi: Being Happier And Healthier

Pushing ahead, I hope that I can achieve my goals to become a nurse. I know that there will be more English classes in my future. I think I will choose to take them in a classroom setting. I also will try to be more diligent in getting my assignments completed correctly the first time and on time. This class has encouraged me to be more proficient at the Blackboard and logging in to read my updates more regularly. I hope that my next English class doesn’t rely on essays so much, just because it is not one of my strengths. English 111 was defiantly a learning experience for

Throughout the past week, we have been reflecting upon the work that was completed throughout the semester. I found that my writing has improved

This essay was a lot of fun and it was interesting how I sort of extended towards only one major point of my last essay. I hope you have fun reading this, and this time I promise you’ll get the

This year in Honors Freshman Literature and Composition, I have grown tremendously as a writer. My essays from the beginning of the year to the end have showed that I have greatly progressed in many skills that I have worked on. While I have acquired strengths this year, I also have weaknesses that I hope to improve next year in my writing.

Firstly I want to thank you so much for the help you have given me and the dedication you have put into your classes. It really shows and I was surprised with how much I was able to learn this year. My writing style has improved amazingly and it's actually pretty surprising. I never thought I would be able to write full essays in just 30 minutes or be prepared for the AP exam, but because of your class and your amazing teaching I was able to and I cannot thank you enough for that.

My main goal for the year was to improve my writing and I do believe I have accomplished that. I am especially proud of how my introduction and conclusion paragraphs have improved. I never knew where to begin with those, but now I feel much more confident when I sit down to write those parts of my essay. I also feel like I did improve on grammar, which is my weakest part of writing an essay. I still have a lot I can improve on in all aspects of my writing, but I am very thankful for this class and the feedback I have received on all my papers. I would like to wish the rest of you good luck on your finals and I hope you all have a great

I just turned in an 8+ page paper! I need some ice cream. And a hot bath. I am seriously in awe that I did it. I dreaded this day since the start of class. Actually, I dreaded the 5-page essay because I didn’t know I would be writing a longer one. I need to stop looking at it since it’s too late now, but I keep noticing little things I wish could change. My daughter just asked how I felt and told me that looking after submitting will only make me sad. Instead I will reflect on the letter I wrote to myself in January. I knew when I signed up for this class it was going to be tough. My first class in twenty-five years! I was nervous and excited at the same time. I remember saying in my introduction discussion that I was “somewhat” excited to in the class.

My semester has been going well, thank you for asking! You expressed an interest in the Dance course that I am taking, so I just wanted to tell you how that class has been going for me so far this semester. Initially, I had thought I was going to take a Music Theory course for my Tier 2 Arts credit, which I need as part of my general education requirements. After being in choir for ten years, it seemed like a good segue from singing into the theory portion of it. However, I decided I wanted to go outside of my comfort zones in college, as this is one of the only times in my life I will be able to explore different things. As cliched as that sounds, it is one of the reasons I am excited to have so many different course selections. Last semester,

Sophomore year, I met my favorite teacher. I was unsure of how I would like the class because I don’t typically enjoy the classes everyone loves going to. However, Mrs. Moore relit my passion for writing and by making it interesting and explaining different ways to make it better. I learned creative and subtle ways to make my essays and speeches the best they could be. She has taught me ways to improve my writing I will use until my very last paper.

I am writing to you today because I believe that I deserve those ten extra points on my semester grade average, and not just cause I wanna pick up my grade even more although it is true but because I believe that I have put effort on the work, I am starting to understand what I am learning, and somethings I can do to improve my work in class that will help me get a better grade.

Hey Mrs. Dillard its Shereen Toolabi! I hope you are doing well. I wanted to update you on my first week of college! I finally settled in Maine and I love it! It's such a different atmosphere here and I've met so many new friends! I plan on rushing for a sorority next week so I'm looking forward to that! All my classes are very easy so far, especially English. In my English class we wrote an essay about the bombing of Hiroshima and determining if it was a terrorist act or not. I received a B on my rough draft and I'm turning in my final draft next Monday. My professor was very impressed with my knowledge of writing and I have no one else to thank but you! My school is very focused on the understanding of writing the perfect college paper so

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This semester has had its ups and downs. The highs and the lows that defined my life at that time. However that being said I still spent the most time learning this semester than I have ever before in school. With the help of the amazing staff and teachers i've had access to through GCI. Even if my grade did not reflect it at the time I was absorbing more information than I ever had before. I now have a level of confidence in my writing that I have never had before. The fact that I can convey my ideas through writing more effectively makes me ecstatic.

By living in such a technically advanced society, I feel there are several things that account towards the decisions we make every day in regards to our health. To further describe the claim that we live in a technically advanced society, we are surrounded by images that are often directed towards health and image. Covers of magazines, famous people, and athletes are all images that most people strive to become or look like. Personally, growing up I always aspired to become a professional hockey player. Admiring my favorite hockey players in the NHL, I always perceived them to being the healthiest people on the planet. In many respects, I was not that far off. Professional athletes, pampered by the best medical care and nutritional advice,

It is always important to take care of your body. The importance of your health is a big deal. There are many reasons why you should care for your body. Not taking care of your body can affect your social health. You can become ill which means you will be at home or seeking medical attention all the time. You won’t be able to function how you usually do. Taking care of yourself affects every aspect of your life. Mentally and emotionally you might not be able to handle the things that you will have to go through. You might fall into a depression and with that emotionally you’re eating habits will become bad. You will lose out on the things that are important to you.