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Habits Of Heart And Mind Analysis

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During the narrative writing unit I wrote a story on my experience with trying to perform at community meeting. The purpose of this unit was to teach our readers a lesson through our own experiences,and my overall score was a 78. The lesson I wanted to teach was that not everything in the world is going to go your way and that's completely natural, and something we all go through that we should learn to accept. The Habits of Heart and Mind that connects to my story is perseverance. (show para. 5)This habit connects because instead of simply giving up and backing away like a coward, I decided to at the most audition because I had a chance of performing either way. During this assignment I learned to use sensory details which is in depth explaining …show more content…

Another learning target I did well on was internal thoughts, which I as well, had a 4 on.In my piece, I show a understanding of internal thoughts on paragraph 5, where I wrote, “ I decided not to let it bother me, and just ask tomorrow, not that I had much choice. I did as I decided but my sleep problems, seemed to have been worse that night. I tossed, turned almost fell of my bed, and stuffed my head into my pillow.” Two learning targets i still need to work on are sensory details and conventions. Now, although this is based on my narrative,I will say that I finished on the very last day we had to finish, and so I rushed a lot of my work and did not take the time to look over it very thoroughly for mistakes, which may be why I have such a low score on these two learning targets for the rubric.The writing process helped me to get a full understanding of my writing before beginning to draft aso I can have a narrative that flows, and reads correctly. Accountability also helped me to make the deadline because I kept myself accountable to my deadlines, even though it resulted in me having mistakes in my

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