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Her Chee To Heart Analysis

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Through the means of her own experiences, Jill McCorkle uses Her Chee-to Heart to express the happiness that many get from padding their faces with junk food. To convince readers truly of this level of happiness, McCorkle uses an extraordinarily visceral form of writing, and sends readers on a gluttonous expedition, making them crave for almost every single food that she so zealously describes and mentions. McCorkle starts her piece of literature off with her “perfect day”, describing the mannerisms of every food she would indulge in, to intentionally provoke an unhealthy yearning for fatty foods. Then, she spends the next few pages continually alluring the readers’ ravenous stomachs, by establishing a certain type of zest. Readers become hungrier …show more content…

McCorkle’s style of words, utter conviction, and confidence made me hungrier and hungrier to read on. Besides her in-depth description of almost every food she mentioned, and her overzealous, first-person tone, what I found to be really effective was McCorkle’s bringing up of her first-grade peer, Michael, and his proclivity for “licking Kool-Aid powder from his palm whenever the teacher wasn’t looking” (McCorkle 32). I found this to be effective, because not only did it show her level of enamor with food at such a young age (she admired Michael for his habit), but also because she used it to close her piece off, three pages later, “I have a dream that somewhere out there in the grown-up, low-fat world there is a boy named Michael licking his lips…” (McCorkle 35). What I find to be slightly ineffective is the paragraph where McCorkle alludes to her sixth grade memory of going to a Kwik-Pik and copiously indulging in unhealthy snacks, such as chocolate chip cookie dough. I feel as if the paragraph came out of the blue, and is, for the most part, not needed. I feel this way this mostly because the paragraph followed another paragraph about her experience in a healthy food section, and this new paragraph about a sixth-grade experience did not offer any helpful

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